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0810占座：Modern society has become more complex,so it is essential for the young people to have the ability to plan and organize.

sigrid_shan

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MrWaiting

sigrid_shan 发表于 2014-8-11 14:44
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Indeed, modern society is quite different from what it is years ago. People’s thoughts also changed a lot. However, in my opinion, the ability to plan and organize is significant for all people.

To begin with, the ability to plan and organize is a basic skill. As it is known to all, if we want to make a difference in future, we need to develop a good habit in our childhood. For example, in my childhood, I was ordered to finish homework before I could watch TV. Actually, I was ordered to finish whatever tasks I was given before I could do something else. I believe that it is the preliminary stage of planning and organizing. My parents taught me an important lesson. If I want to relax, I need to put my work first. Consequently, I know that there is something I should do first, and I must finish it first. If I plan to have a party with my friends, I must finish my work.

In addition, good planning and organization is important in everyone’s daily life. We cannot deny the fact that every great accomplishment is involved in good planning and organization. For instance, I like opera. I like it not only because its lyrics or its words, but because its music or every actor’s movement. And I know exactly that they were all designed to express either the characters’ personalities or hidden meaning. Although we see only several minutes of a scene on the stage, it takes a lot of people probably months to design the movement or compose the music. It is the same on other cases. One achievement may take one a life time to plan or organize.

Finally, I think that one’s daily life is a process of planning and organizing. Every day, we decide what to do, when to do and how to do. In the morning, we plan to deal with the files we could not finish last night. In the afternoon, we get a call from our family. We plan to pick them up first, then, take them to a restaurant. At night, we plan to go to the seaside with our family on this year’s Christmas holidays. As we can see, planning and organizing consist of our daily lives.

To summarize, as modern technologies are improving, the ability to plan and organize is becoming increasingly important and complex not only for young people but for everyone.

MrWaiting

占8.11 书籍比电视对社会有更大影响

Indeed, digital technology plays an important role in modern times. Using computers or cellphones to deal with problems is a commonplace. Also, people use television to get current affairs updated or to have a relax. In my opinion, however, compared with television, book exerts a more influential effect on society.

To begin with, book has a much longer history in human society. The use of books could date back to thousands of years ago while television has been invented only for about a hundred years. In ancient times, people acquired knowledge through books because they are the only source to spread ideas. For example, we came to know a lot of physics theories from manuscripts of many great scientists. Actually, it is safe to say that book leads the entire human race to modern civilization. When we encounter a problem, the first thought is to look it up on books not on television.

In addition, book is educational while television is recreational. When we were a child, we went to school to learn knowledge on books. For instance, in my childhood, I was ordered to read more books but not to watch more television. I believe that it is widely accepted that people read books to learn and watch television to relax. We know that there are too much things unsuitable for young people to get to know in television, such as violence, blood and advertisements. In books, however, there are a lot we can learn from. When we read a novel, we can learn beautiful words and expressions in it. When we read a science fiction, we are probably fascinated by the thoughts and foresight of the author. We know many technologies in science fictions became true, such as plane and submarine.

Finally, although I have to admit that some programs are helpful, they are broadcasted at a certain time in most occasions. I am fond of Discovery, but the programs are set in a particular time. Only in that moment can I see my favorite video. If I just have a lot of work to do, I am afraid that I definitely will miss it. Moreover, surely, there are some books forbidden by society, books that some people may use as a weapon to cause serious social problems. Most books are healthy and enlightened. People should pay much attention in choosing books. Right books will lead one to a bright road.

To summarize, book, as the only way to pass knowledge through generations to generations for thousands of years, has more influence on human society and history than television does. I think that today, book will continue to show human the right path in every field.

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MrWaiting

占8.14 过去老师比现在老师对年轻人影响力更大

Nowadays modern technologies have greatlychanged human beings’ lives. Also, the concept of education improved a lot. Thus,the assumption that teachers played a more significant role in the past hasnowhere to stand.

First and foremost, compared with the past,an increasing number of young people have the access to education. In otherwords, teachers can get more opportunities to contact with young people and toinfluence them. For example, several decades ago, most Chinese regarded teacheras the worst profession. They despised their teachers, and they woulddeliberately hand in undone examination papers. It was the entire socialmovement that influenced their mind. Not until the end of 1970s did thesepeople realize that they were wrong. People finally started to accept teachersand viewed them as the industrious “gardeners” for young people. More and morepeople went to college in the past twenty years. I believe that thetransformation made it possible for Chinese society and economy to develop at anincredible speed.

In addition, as technologies are improving,modern teachers’ impacts on youth lie in more fields. Although the Internetchanged the way of life of the whole generation, teachers still exert considerableeffect on young people’s thoughts. In my school, for instance, teachers willlearn not only the subject he or she teaches, but also a broad field, such aspsychology, computer and first aid. Teachers start to get aware that there issomething more important than mere teaching or reprimand. Young people’s mentalhealth is as essential as their academic performances. Consequently, teachers’professional knowledge in other fields helps mold a student.

Finally, what the students learn now ismore advanced than that in the past. Even about a hundred years ago, peopleknew little about the nature or universe. Modern development ensures youngpeople a more complex and specialized world to research. Without teacher’shelp, it is nearly impossible for an individual to get comprehensiveunderstanding of the knowledge on which he or she focuses. For example, certainfields, such as archaeology or zoology, require a great amount of interactionand observation with teachers. Making a mistake may result in an inconceivableconsequence. So teachers’ role in these subjects is crucial for young people togain what they want to study.

To summarize, since the ancient time, teachershave always been a key to young people’s growing, and there is no doubt thatthis impact will continue to become stronger in the future.

小蘑菇开始打怪

0814 revised by mushroom (sorry for being late)

Nowadays modern technologies have greatly changed human beings’ lives. Also, the concept of education improved a lot. Thus,the assumption that teachers played a more significant role in the past has nowhere to stand.

First and foremost, compared with the past,an increasing number of young people have the access to education. In otherwords, teachers can get more opportunities to contact with young people and to influence them. For example, several decades ago, most Chinese regarded teacheras the worst profession. They despised their teachers, and they would deliberately hand in undone examination papers. It was the entire social movement that influenced their mind. Not until the end of 1970s did these people realize that they were wrong. People finally started to accept teachers and viewed them as the industrious “gardeners” for young people. More and more people went to college in the past twenty years. I believe that the transformation made it possible for Chinese society and economy to develop at an incredible speed.

In addition, as technologies are improving,modern teachers’ impacts on youth lie in more fields. Although the Internetchanged the way of life of the whole generation, teachers still exert considerableeffect on young people’s thoughts. In my school, for instance, teachers willlearn not only the subject he or she teaches, but also a broad field, such aspsychology, computer and first aid. Teachers start to get aware that there issomething more important than mere teaching or reprimand. Young people’s mentalhealth is as essential as their academic performances. Consequently, teachers’professional knowledge in other fields helps mold a student.

Finally, what the students learn now ismore advanced than that in the past. Even about a hundred years ago, peopleknew little about the nature or universe. Modern development ensures youngpeople a more complex and specialized world to research. Without teacher’shelp, it is nearly impossible for an individual to get comprehensiveunderstanding of the knowledge on which he or she focuses. For example, certainfields, such as archaeology or zoology, require a great amount of interactionand observation with teachers. Making a mistake may result in an inconceivableconsequence. So teachers’ role in these subjects is crucial for young people togain what they want to study.

To summarize, since the ancient time, teachershave always been a key to young people’s growing, and there is no doubt thatthis impact will continue to become stronger in the future.

等叔你的作文已经写得很好了啊。。改不出来了，语法也没看出什么来。
顺便还学了不少单词和用法！
然后一点排版的问题，出现了单词粘连的问题，可以在文档中写txt纯文本，然后再粘到CD就不会有粘连了。

MrWaiting

8.17 Although a lot of people know the environmental situation( global warming etc) the present situation is unlikely to change in the future

Some say that it is incredible that although most people know the pollution will threaten the lives of the entire human race, we still keep spoiling our planet. However, in my opinion, I believe it is nothing unbelievable but sheer reality.

To begin with, environmental pollution is not as easy to deal with as we expected. For decades, governments have used modern technologies to attempt to save the earth. The truth, however, is discouraging. The air keeps becoming worse, while, at the same time animal extinction seems unstoppable. For example, every winter, there are numerous days on which I can barely see the blue sky in Beijing, the city I live in, because of air pollution. People are easy to get lung or respiration diseases on these days. Although the city government takes measures to try to stop the air pollution, such as restriction on car registration or relocation of industries, the frog continue to spread every year. People in Beijing are still exploring a way to control the air pollution.

In addition, as we all know, environmental protection is a process of investment without reward. To completely handle the environmental problems, governments and companies already spent billions of dollars to improve modern technologies. But they all know clearly that they cannot get any profit in protecting the nature. It is only a burden but not a chance to save money. For instance, a lot of factories in China secretly dump their waste into lands, rivers or air. They are willing to bribe inspectors to escape the fine because compared with the bribery, it will cost more to save the earth. Thus, most companies would rather take the risks than comply with the law.

Finally, most people are not aware of the importance of protecting the nature. Although we are overwhelmed by the TV programs that time is of essence for environmental protection, people just think that the dooms day is far away from them. In rural part of China, a lot of people only accepted preliminary education such that they will imitate what others do. Actually, even those who received higher education do not think it a problem to throw several batteries or to dump the chemical waste into the river. And I suppose people’s indifference is the reason why pollution is hard to deal with.

To sum up, environmental protection is a road without an end. I think the best way to protect the earth is to avoid pollution.

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sorry 有点晚了