Emily Dickinson's letters to Susan Huntington Dickinson were written over a period beginning a few years before Susan's marriage to Emily's brother and ending shortly before Emily's death in 1886, outnumbering her letters to anyone else.
Emily Dickinson's letters to Susan Huntington Dickinson were written over a period beginning a few years before Susan's marriage to Emily's brother and ending shortly before Emily's death in 1886, outnumbering her letters to anyone else.
(A) Dickinson were written over a period beginning a few years before Susan's marriage to Emily's brother and ending shortly before Emily's death in 1886, outnumbering
(B) Dickinson were written over a period that begins a few years before Susan's marriage to Emily's brother and ended shortly before Emily's death in 1886, outnumber
(C) Dickinson, written over a period beginning a few years before Susan's marriage to Emily's brother and that ends shortly before Emily's death in 1886 and outnumbering
(D) Dickinson, which were written over a period beginning a few years before Susan's marriage to Emily's brother, ending shortly before Emily's death in 1886, and outnumbering
(E) Dickinson, which were written over a period beginning a few years before Susan's marriage to Emily's brother and ending shortly before Emily's death in 1886, outnumber
正确答案是E,但是如果是E的话,which的先行词是letters,中间间隔了“to Susan Huntington Dickinson”,这样是不是违背了TOUCH原则。
Manhattan中的TOUCH原则例外一共有四个(manhattan SC 5th P238),但是并不包括这一个,这个怎么解释呢?
1.A “mission-critical” modifier falls between. This modifier is often an "Of-phrase"that defines the none.The less important modifier refers to the noun plus the first modifier.
RIGHT:He had a way OF DODGING OPPONENTS that impresses the scouts.
2.A very short predicate falls between, shifting a very long modofier back.
3.A short non-essential phrase intervenes and is set off by commas.
4.The modifier is part of parallel modifiers, one of which touches the noun.