一道prep题的解释

finalcloud

78、[color=rgb(0, 153, 0) !important]Hans Christian Andersen wrote fairy tales, which have been some of the most frequently translated works in literary history, while he wrote plays, novels, poems, and travel books, as well as several autobiographies, which remained almost unknown outside his native [color=rgb(0, 153, 0) !important]Denmark.
　　(A) Hans [color=rgb(0, 153, 0) !important]Christian Andersen wrote [color=rgb(0, 153, 0) !important]fairy tales, which have been some of the most frequently translated works in literary history, while he wrote plays, novels, poems, and [color=rgb(0, 153, 0) !important]travel books, as well as several autobiographies, which remained
　　(B) Hans Christian Andersen wrote fairy tales, which, while among the most frequently translated works in literary history, his plays, novels, poems, and travel books, as well as several autobiographies remain
　　(C) Even as Hans Christian Andersen's fairy tales have been among the most frequently translated works in literary history, still his plays, novels, poems, and travel books, as well as several autobiographies, remain
　　(D) Unlike the fairy tales written by Hans Christian Andersen, which are some of the most frequently translated works in literary history, he wrote plays, novels, poems, and travel books, as well as several autobiographies, which remained
　　(E) Although Hans Christian Andersen wrote fairy tales that are among the most frequently translated works in literary history, his plays, novels, poems, and travel books, as well as several autobiographies, remain
      我是认为A和E都对， 看了解释还是疑惑  解释说a答案用which 引导不合适，应该用that , 还说while在这里表示当什么 什么的时候，为什么不能是表示转折的呢，希望大家能帮我解释下 谢谢

brfmzbjz

while的用法：
while引导的从句：
1) 意思是“当…时”，放句首或句中
2) 意思是“转折对比contrast”时，多放在句中，也可以放在句首。while表示对比概念的时候，两个事物要是同时发生（但是while本身并没有at the same time的意思，所以while at the same time是可以prep 1-96）。
3) 意思是“虽然、尽管”（让步）时，多放在句首。(=although)
4) 表示条件,意为"只要",其意思和用法相当于as long as。while可位于句首,也可位于句中。

本局逻辑强调的是Hans 的plays, poems,....., 这部分
所以不管用although 还是 while , 后面都应该是 Hans wrote fairy tales
A 里面 while 的位置显然不对

另外 即便 A选项 while 放在了句首
表达的意思和E 仍有差别
While Hans wrote X, he wrote Y, which remained...
这里对比的重点变成 wrote X 和 wrote Y 这两个动作
而不是X 和 Y 这两个名词 迥异的下场= =..

关于which 能否引导限定性从句
不是Gmat的考点
但是这里 fairy tales 的伟大 是不可以去掉的部分
只有它存在了 才可以和后面plays, poems 的惨淡来对比
因此要用限定性从句
而限定性从句最好用that

DUKB24

brfmzbjz 发表于 2014-6-16 12:07
while的用法：
while引导的从句：
1) 意思是“当…时”，放句首或句中

写的很好，赞一个！

这题关键还是考句意

prep语法笔记里面已经有好多过时的东西。。。

brfmzbjz

DUKB24 发表于 2014-6-16 12:42
写的很好，赞一个！

这题关键还是考句意

是哦
里面基本没有语义的分析
起步来用还不错
进阶不太够~
难题拼到最后两个选项 蛮多都是只能拼句意了

finalcloud

谢谢，从句意下手有时真的很难，主要在于要能读的很懂吧，反正我是在崩溃的边缘。