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今天收到成绩了~~过了分数线4分~~~~lol~~

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楼主
发表于 2005-1-24 02:18:00 | 只看该作者

今天收到成绩了~~过了分数线4分~~~~lol~~

217耶~~作文考了5.0~~~lol~~


谢谢CD的帮助~~~彻底和TOEFL say 88了~~~~~~~~


作文用的是模板呢~~且however那段还没有时间写.......不过有让偶的ESL老师修改了一下偶从网上COPY的模板~~她说模板里有蛮多的语法错误的.....当时她看第一眼就知道不是美国人写的了............. @@||||||||



anyway~~偶知道和很多厉害的同学比起来....217很低啦.....但偶蛮满足了 ...........

沙发
发表于 2005-1-24 02:52:00 | 只看该作者

congratulations ! ! !

板凳
发表于 2005-1-24 03:23:00 | 只看该作者

那个模板啊

地板
发表于 2005-1-24 05:36:00 | 只看该作者
good job!!
5#
发表于 2005-1-24 06:33:00 | 只看该作者
可以把老师改过的模版贡献出来看看吗?
6#
发表于 2005-1-24 06:50:00 | 只看该作者
congratulation
7#
发表于 2005-1-24 07:28:00 | 只看该作者
呵呵,祝贺祝贺!!欢迎经常回来!!
8#
发表于 2005-1-24 08:21:00 | 只看该作者
祝贺祝贺,常回来看看
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 楼主| 发表于 2005-1-24 08:39:00 | 只看该作者
以下是引用xiaoq在2005-1-24 6:33:00的发言:
可以把老师改过的模版贡献出来看看吗?

当然可以~~~~~ 偶的原始模板是从这里&太傻的2个模板综合起来~~然后再让老师改的~~~

应该适合"A&DA"和"A or B"的两种类型......

有一点乱......偶已经尽力整理了.......多多包涵............@@|||||||


This is a controversial issue about whether, _________ or not. Depending on personal experience, personality type and emotional concern, we may find that some people hold the idea of A; on the other hand, some people might choose B instead. The choice, nevertheless, is not easy to make. However, from my point of view, I will agree that the later/former one is more reasonable. The opinion of A is more advisable than the opinion of B; my arguments are listed as follows.


[ 如果是那种有足够的钱应该买电脑还是书topic, 就可以用这个句子代替上面加粗的两个句子: This is a controversial issue about whether, if_________, should they_____ or ______?  & My opinion is that______ is more advisable than _________. ]



The first essential reason that supports my opinion, which can be seen by everyone, is that ___________. For example, ________In short, even though there are many different views concerning this topic, for my part, I also would like to concur with A.



The second chief reason which I have chosen for evidence is ________. There is no better illustration that can demonstrate this view.__________



Although I agree that there might be a couple advantages of [the idea of] B, I feel that the disadvantages are more obvious, such as ___________.Taking into account all of these factors and recognizing the fact, to be frank, I would like to select A as my best choice.



In conclusion, _________ To sum up, given those sagacious reasons which are discussed above, I strongly commit to the notion that A, but not B.


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 楼主| 发表于 2005-1-24 08:42:00 | 只看该作者

谢谢大家~~现在就剩等录取书了.............lol~~~


对了...偶还是把DOC文件传上来吧.....在那里面看会比较整齐一些..............


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