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youkymomo 发表于 2014-4-14 20:57
4.13独立写作 Getting advice from friends who are older than youis more valuable than getting advice  ...

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youkymomo

4.15独立There is no reason for people to be impolite（rude） to another person
High-speed changes of modern society has arose a large number of problems in humans’ daily life. Whether a person to be impolite to others with a lot of excuses is forgivable or not as the heated discussed issue has been controversial since it was raised up. From my own perspective, the one idea that I personally subscribe to, is that there is no excuse for a person who can treat others without manners. My conclusion will be demonstrated in different dimensions in the subsequent article.
First and the foremost, rude behaviors can not only make unhealthy impact on our own physical health but also on our mental health. In one hand, people often treat others in impolite manner since they are mad, anxiety, nervous or sadness. Thereby, it is actually for people to be affected by the bad mood of their own. And it may also influent the bodies’ secretion of hormone .On the other hand, with mental health, the behaviors lack of manners may cause an erratic emotion of people. It may easy to lead to the solution that people can not even consider or remember any things with clear mind. The passive emotion may stimulate them to do some things out of mind and control.
Moreover, treating another person through impolite approach can also affect the appraisal of others. Imagine your best friend quarreled with you for a divergence of view and push you during the process of the argument. It must affect the close relationship between you and your friend. In another occasion, if you said expression of your own views in rude manner to your parents, you may easily hurt the people who love you in deep heart and regretted after the moment you do it. Obviously, both the situation mentioned above can surely reduce the evaluation by the others for you. Generally, if you have an occupation, the impolite and impulsive actions may severely delay your promotion and block you to success.
Granted，It is not a proper fashion to release your pressure or express your own satisfaction which may hurt others who believe in you, rely on you or fall in love with you. Among so many practical measures, which you can take, such as yoga, boxing or long-distance race can also efficiently solve your emotional trouble.
Due to the above-mentioned reasons, we may safely arrive at the summary that to be rude to other people has a lot of disadvantages not only for your own but also for the relationship or the evaluation by others. What you make of your performance to others and which way do you select will decide nothing less than the future of your own life.

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youkymomo 发表于 2014-4-17 10:52
4.15独立There is no reason for people to be impolite（rude） to another person
High-speed changes of ...

改完啦，加油！

youkymomo

4.17独立写作
Teachers should assign homework for students every day.
Have you ever feel overwhelmed for your assignments in your school days? Lately, an animated discussion of whether teachers should give the assignments every day or not has been controversial by students. From my own perspective, I consent the statement that accomplishing homework every day may not be benefit to students study. The reasons why I claim this idea will be demonstrated as follows.  
First and the foremost, good performance is not equal to more homework. The confusion that the more homework teachers assigned the higher grade students will get is so much wrong. The elements which can actually improve the grades of students are the attitude of study and consciousness of future. A person’s awareness definitely influent one’s behavior. No matter how advanced condition students possess, none of it will make a difference, unless students can realize the vital practical significance of education. No place will arrived without motivation. If a person long to fulfill his dream eagerly, he will try his best to achieve the goal without any spur. So I support teachers to encourage students to chase their own dream instead of assigned too much homework every day.
Moreover, teachers should give students more space to cultivate the variety of abilities. For instance, students can spend the majority of time on taking a part-time job, participating in group activities and attending social campaign and so forth. All of these will improve their competence such as how to communicate with guests when you work in the fast-food restaurant, how to look after the children who lose language ability in the welfare home, how to manage their time well and get the most important things at the first place. Different people have different talents. Inarguably, we should have rights to schedule our own time after school.
Admittedly, although it is under the scrutiny of teachers, there is no denying the fact that completing the assignments does good to our study. Nonetheless, for both students and teachers, it is a heavy burden in their daily life. Teachers may have to give up their spare time and sacrifice their inclination in order to provide timely feedbacks to students. There is no way around the fact that it is not the most proper and efficient way to improve the grades of students.
Due to the reasons mentioned above, I firmly hold the idea that everyday assignments may not be the best choice for students and teachers. Decided by multiple factors, the best way should consider these advantages and disadvantages comprehensively.

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不好意思，批改晚了，写的很好！

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