Vicky的作文贴（快考试了求狠批）

Vicky94

先占一楼，明日上菜~~~~~

拒绝拖延，从我做起！

olivia瓜瓜

顶起喔

Vicky94

2014-03-16 综合 TPO23
294w
27mins

The reading passage lists three hypotheses to illustrate the fact that population of the yellow cedar has declined since about 1800. While the professor thinks the reason for the declination is still not clear, and the hypotheses claimed in the reading are not convincing.

In the first place, although the reading believes that the yellow cedar may be attacked by the cedar bark beetle, as the beetle larvae feed on the wood. However, the professor argues that the healthy cedar can be much more resistant to the attack, and the can be powerful on chemical -- produce poison that threaten the beetle. Besides, the beetle can only eat the cedars that nearly to die. Thus the point given by the reading is not fundamental.

Moreover, it is true that the brown bears can attack the cedar by clawing to gain high sugar content. Nevertheless, the professor points that not overall population of the yellow cedar declines because of the attack of the bear. The cedars live in both mainland and island, yet there are no bear exists in the island, in other words, the population still declines without bears in the island.  

Finally, the reading passage holds that the roots of the cedar trees can be frozen on cold winter night and cause the damage of the trees whereas the professor this hypothesis ignores one fact -- the elevation. The professor asserts that the population of the cedars in high elevation is much more than the cedars live in low elevation. If temperature matters, the cedars lives in high elevation are easily died and its population would be less than the cedars live in low elevation. Thus, there is no doubt that the reason related to temperature that pointed by the reading is indefensible

Vicky94

olivia瓜瓜 发表于 2014-3-16 13:19
顶起喔

默默的跑去写独立了

Vicky94

2014-03-16 独立 Should the government support artists or should the artists support themselves?
576w
57mins
30分钟写不完啊 TT 要哭了。。。。

Nowadays, there are an increasing number of people addicting into the circle of chasing money, paying less and less attention on thinking about the culture, appreciating the art works, due to the changing, colorful and money-based society. However, we cannot ignore the powerful impact that the art can bring to us. The point is art is a spirit of a county, a nation, a society, a fascinating thing that can bring some changes to the world. In order to refresh the art, in my opinion, the best way is to let artists be supported by the government rather than supported by the artists themselves.

At the first place, the government has the potent ability to conduct a law, a regulation, and quickly gather capital and the labor. Based on these powers, artists can be fully supported and find an easier way to develop their own career, even protect the extinct traditional cultural heritage. And Jianzhi, a Chinese traditional artwork in my hometown, can be a very point to illustrate this point. At the beginning of 2001, Jianzhi was not as famous as it is now, as no one in my hometown had the desire to learn the skill for its low economic benefit. There did exist several artists who wanted to inherit this traditional art but finally in vain, due to the lack of money and the poor fame of Jianzhi. Nevertheless, the artists had to turn to government for help and changes have been taken since 2008. Jianzhi was chosen as the official souvenir of the Beijing Olympic Games. Gradually, Jianzhi becomes increasing famous among Chinese people and the government set a regulation to make sure the successors of Jianzhi with investment. Thus, the success of Jianzhi cannot live without the support of the government.

In addition, the support of the government, in fact, makes the art field more vibrant and competitive, and eventually refreshes the art. The form of support can be conducted as a form of competition, and the artist who wins can receive a large amount of money as his fundamental capital to develop. My friends Kevin is a very talented painter, who also wants to get a sum of bucks to support his art career via the similar competition hold by Brazilian authority annually. Although he failed in that competition, it not stops him to show his strong desire to create more convincing and marvelous to compete with those more talented and great artists in that competition. Because of the smart approach that came up with the government, more and more artists, like Kevin, are motivated and begin to create and design more high-quality works.

Granted, there is a possible factor that the support from the government can threaten artists’ freedom. In other words, artists have little possibility to make the art works based on personal emotion with the limitation the government may set. Nevertheless, what if the works contain unhealthy content that do pretty much harm to the juvenile like violence, sex, dark music, etc.? Compared with the two possible effects, the opportunities and benefits of the support from government obviously overweigh the harm the government’s support brings.

In sum, considering all factors and possibilities mentioned above, I firmly hold that it is the support from government that can truly support the artist and refresh the art field. And no doubt, the support of government is superior to the support of artists for the considerable benefits and a little harm.

JanetYellen

Vicky94 发表于 2014-3-16 20:11
2014-03-16 综合 TPO23
294w
27mins

综合已改，请阅~

Vicky94

JanetYellen 发表于 2014-3-18 00:14
综合已改，请阅~

谢谢 Jane 你的我很快就传给你
其实我听第一个point的时候chemical那个地方听得不是很详细，但我笔记上记了一个chemical，所以我觉得那我理解得不是很好，写出来也似乎不够详细。
也很谢谢你关于dash的用法的提醒，很多细节我做的不够好。
Thanks~~

wendy23peterpan

综合的马上来！

wendy23peterpan

改得不好 互相指导