求大神帮忙看看作文马上要考试了。跪谢！！！！

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题目是：Do you agree or disagree the following statement: your job has more effect on your happiness than your living environment

我的疑惑是这种题目要不要去比较job 和 living environment。我感觉如果只讲一头会有点偏题？
30min打完字数635会不会太多了？
谢谢大神们！！！！

If you randomly asks a person what hisbiggest wish is, always but not every time 'a good job' is included in numerousanswers. This may refer to a job with high payments, good working environment,good promotion prospects etc. I believe the reason why a nice job is usuallyfancied by us because it closely correlates with our happiness, which in myeyes, it affect on our happiness more than our living environment.

Why is job has anything to do withhappiness. Aren’t people supposed to enjoy rest and a nice living environmentrather than work? Because job is the most fundamental aspect in each individualthat provide us with income to support our life, that make us respected byothers. Let's assume you live in a beautiful countryside, but you are one ofthe jobless. There's no way for you to earn money to buy the necessities orenjoy a movie in a comfortable theater. Soon, you got tired of the gorgeousnatural sceneries and worried about how you earn your keep. It's true peoplewill feel happy to live in a nice place, but it's almost impossible to be happywhen our job is lost or seriously harmed, followed by a tight budget andpressure to make a living. That's how you can understand why a research list anice and secure job is closely related to citizen's happiness index and why ourTV news program always focus on unemployment rate.Although it's a bit cynicalto say money can buy happiness, it's true like JK Roweling once saidoverty isonly romanticized by poor. That's why job effect our happiness.

Futhermore, we have to realize after weenter the workforce, we would spend most of our days in our companies, where wemeet our colleagues, do our businsses. And it goes without saying our emotionsare tightly linked with these people and activities. It's now a common scene inreal life or on TV that a husband went home with his troubles at offices;awomen easily lose her temper when her collegues refused to aid her withimportant tasks;or employees got depressed because his boss rejected hisproposal of a promotion. You see, much of our fear, anger, disappointmentderives from our job, and our days can be easily ruined when things don't gosmooth in the offices. Anyway, who would remain happy when a thing thatrequires him to get up a seven and go home at 6, and sometimes even atmidnight,turn into a fuss? Actually, a newspaper once did an interesting surveyon what makes you least happy among citizens: the result is the offce politics.

Most importantly, the job goes beyond thebasic material pursuit, and is about our dream, our career. According toMaslow's human needs Theory, after we meet our rudimentary needs such asdrinking, feeding, clothing, we have higher needs like self-fullfillment andpersonal accomplishment. And the job, after serving our initial purposes, alsofunctions as a platform for our higher goals. JK Roweling, the world renownedBritish writer, lived in a shelter while she was writing Harry Potter. Truth betold, her living environment is barely satisfactory, but like she said she gainso much happiness from her job:writer. Everyday JK simply ordered a cup ofcoffee at a Cafe and started a new day writing. Her imagination flowed, herwisdom kept sparking and she was just happy about how she could write,regardless of the fact she was poor. It's her job that make her revive, thatlit up the hope for her, that gave her confidence and most essentiallyhappiness. Just like her, everyone of us would feel an extreme happiness whenwe gain that speical accomplishment from our job. And it's our job that canonly provide us with such enormous happiness.