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TWE84, 请各位指点,谢谢

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楼主
发表于 2005-1-10 17:02:00 | 只看该作者

TWE84, 请各位指点,谢谢

84. Some people prefer to spend time with one or two close friends. Others choose to spend time with a large number of friends. Compare the advantages of each choice. Which of these two ways of spending time do you prefer? Use specific reasons to support your answer.



Depending on personal experience, personality type and emotional concern, some people prefer to spend time with one or two close friends, but others, in contrast, deem spending time with a large number of friends as the premier choice. There are some advantages on both sides.



Firstly, spending time with one or two close friends has its own advantages, that is, we can know each other better and develop a deep friendship. We can chat more clearly with one or two friends than with a large group. There would be probably too noise in a large group, and even one cannot hear the other one. But talking with one or two close friends is just the opposite.  In a quiet environment, we just talk with one or two friends and tell them what happened to us and what the problem is. Even they are unable to solve the problem, they can help us release our stresses. This really helps us to build up a closer relationship.



On the other hand, spending time with a large group also has its unique advantages that we can be exposed to the more colorful and interesting aspects of the lives of more people. It can be given a concrete example that a large number of friends are better than one or two friends when it is a celebration. In the New Year’s Eve, many people go downtown to count down. It is a wonderful time to welcome the New Year with thousands of people. Moreover, it is a good choice to spent time with a large number of friends going camping. During the camping, we can help each other and make fun.



Although sometimes I would spend time with many friends, personally, I prefer to spend my time with one or two friends of my own choice, so that we can have some quiet and quality time together. It is not always necessary to spent time with a large number of friends, because at that time we just make fun and it seems to waste the time. I like to be with one or two friends because we can share experiences, discuss the problem and have a good get together in a quiet environment.


沙发
发表于 2005-1-11 11:34:00 | 只看该作者
以下是引用天上人间在2005-1-10 17:02:00的发言:

84. Some people prefer to spend time with one or two close friends. Others choose to spend time with a large number of friends. Compare the advantages of each choice. Which of these two ways of spending time do you prefer? Use specific reasons to support your answer.






Depending on personal experience, personality type and emotional concern, some people prefer to spend time with one or two close friends, but others, in contrast, deem spending time with a large number of friends as the premier choice. There are some advantages on both sides.





Firstly, spending time with one or two close friends has its own advantages, that is, we can know each other better and develop a deep friendship. We can chat more clearly with one or two friends than with a large group. There would be probably too noise in a large group, and even one cannot hear the other one. But talking with one or two close friends is just the opposite.  In a quiet environment, we just talk with one or two friends and tell them what happened to us and what the problem is. Even they are unable to solve the problem, they can help us release our stresses. This really helps us to build up a closer relationship.





On the other hand, spending time with a large group also has its unique advantages that we can be exposed to the more colorful and interesting aspects of the lives of more people. It can be given a concrete example that a large number of friends are better than one or two friends when it is a celebration. In the New Year’s Eve, many people go downtown to count down. It is a wonderful time to welcome the New Year with thousands of people. Moreover, it is a good choice to spent time with a large number of friends going camping. During the camping, we can help each other and make fun.





Although sometimes I would spend time with many friends, personally, I prefer to spend my time with one or two friends of my own choice, so that we can have some quiet and quality time together. It is not always necessary to spent time with a large number of friends, because at that time we just make fun and it seems to waste the time. I like to be with one or two friends because we can share experiences, discuss the problem and have a good get together in a quiet environment.



我觉得写得不错了。如果是卡时间写的, 考试能写这样, 应该真的不错了。

板凳
 楼主| 发表于 2005-1-11 11:39:00 | 只看该作者

谢谢。

这篇我花得时间比较多,因为实在想不到太多理由,没有卡时间

地板
发表于 2005-1-12 23:14:00 | 只看该作者
写的时候一定要卡时间, 写完再改, 就不用卡时间了。
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发表于 2005-1-16 09:44:00 | 只看该作者

审题的时候,尽量本着“那个观点好写,就赞同那个观点”的原则,不必跟自己原来的观点一致。

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 楼主| 发表于 2005-1-17 13:12:00 | 只看该作者

老九兄,我不是很明白。

是否我应该只是选择一个观点详说,而不是像我现在写得那样“两个的优点都说最后说我喜欢哪个为什么喜欢”?

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