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[资料分享] 【自己编的炒鸡棒神模板+综合模板】妈妈再也不担心我不会写作文啦~~~~~~~O(∩_∩)O~~

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发表于 2013-11-12 21:22:56 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
明天11。2的托福就出分鸟,好紧张好紧张,大四党的最后一战啊,终于要熬到头了!!!为了攒人品就把我辛苦编纂的【超级棒神模板】分享给陪我奋斗的CDer们!

【超级给力无敌神模板!!!
我花了好多心血好多时间编纂的“神模板”,虽说叫模板,但其实有十几页哦!是按照 开头-起-承-转-结尾 对比 举例 这样的类别分类总结了各种超牛逼句型(华丽丽大排比,超有力反问句,疑问式开头,别人皆醉我独醒之类),绝对覆盖所有题目的需求,而且超级百搭,随意挑选不同句子搭配,轻轻松松500~上次考试我还是个30分钟憋出250+字的弱逼,这次25分钟就写到了500字有木有~考前我用模板里的句型套鸡精题目练了几篇,找新X方老师打分都有27+哦!
P.S. 当然有时间的同学最好能编写属于自己的神模板,考场上才能信手拈来,思如泉涌,不用费心去想文档上的句子~推荐大家参考我的格式去补充自己喜欢的句型~!

这么好的东西大家回个帖祝我考100+就给你们哦!!么么!



对啦,再分享点综合作文的心得。首先,一个140-180字的模板是很重要的,而且这个综合模板必须是自己编写的,不能抄大众模板,否则看上去很不美观。我从各种作文书籍(包括GMAT考试作文的一点经验)中,总结出我的综合模板,180字,分享给你们。欢迎借鉴引用,不过不要整个抄哦,和大家撞版的话可是得不了高分哒!而且我的综合模板是考前两天紧急赶出来的,所以后面单词替换和句型准备的比较少,但事实证明,这个模板已经相当够用了~~~(因为综合作文其实不难,听力好+个性模板,一定能答好),来吧,让我们20分钟轻松写出350+字的优秀综合作文~



【开头】
The lecture apparently disproves what is argued in the reading material. According to the passage… However the professor asserts that a closer scrutiny of this argument wouldreveal how flimsy it is. He then presents several evidences to demonstrate his statement.

【没考虑到别的可能性OP
To start with, the professor claims that thereading passage fails to take into account that…
Therefore, the assertion of the authorseems too absolute since other possibilities could not be eliminated by any currentevidence.

【假设错误WA
Furthermore, the passage assumes that…. Theprofessor, however, suggests that this assumption may not be merited by theevidence. Say, ….. The contradiction is obvious here when … . On the basis ofthis point the lecture explicitly refutes the passage.

【部分正确,但忽视了事实NT
Last but not the least, the passage may beright about …., but one critical fact is being left out of consideration. Pointedout by the professor, the author totally neglects the truth that… On account ofabove-mentioned grave mistakes, the author’s assertion turned out to be apreposterous idea.

In conclusion, based on the argumentsoffered above, the professor clearly identifies the defects in the readingpassage and forcefully shows that…

文中至少有一个举例形式,如果实在用不到上面句型,可以用转述凑字数:In other words, that is to say, …

Argue = contend

其他有用句型:The reading assumes that…, a situation that seems to be atodds with … 是矛盾的

词汇:
premise 前提
believe deeply 深信不疑
understand = comprehend 理解
Assumption = supposition

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发表于 2013-11-12 21:57:39 | 显示全部楼层
:)
发表于 2013-11-12 22:45:30 | 显示全部楼层
谢谢楼主!!!!!!!!!!!
发表于 2013-11-13 02:02:09 | 显示全部楼层
mmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
 楼主| 发表于 2013-11-13 09:05:50 | 显示全部楼层
飞鱼luna 发表于 2013-11-12 21:57

谢谢你们鼓励!我考到100分啦!作文10天从两个Fair到两个Good,就靠的这两个模板,你们要好好使用哦!
发表于 2013-11-13 09:35:49 | 显示全部楼层
thank              
发表于 2013-11-13 09:44:47 | 显示全部楼层
thanks for sharing
发表于 2013-11-13 10:45:06 | 显示全部楼层
感谢楼主!!!!
发表于 2013-11-13 10:55:23 | 显示全部楼层
祝楼主考100+
发表于 2013-11-13 11:38:27 | 显示全部楼层
楼主好人
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