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上次托福93，作文只有22，综合good,独立faire,这个月27号考，期望能提高到27，希望而已啦，最近在看老外185， 作文替换词，点睛之笔200句等大神推荐的文章，今天有空自己挑了一篇感觉不是很好选的题材，《改变自己家乡》，献丑了，真丑死了，求死劈。

  Hometown is the place we born and live. The undisputablefact is that every individual loves their hometowns. However, I deem thatthings need constantly change due to that growing desires from human beingalong with the development of different facets of life need to be satisfied, ifI am ever given a change to change one importance thing of my hometown, I wouldlike to change the internet service in my hometown.

  Before the discussion, I desire to defend for the internet, somecharacters only consider internet as an entertainment, but, however, internetis conductive to a host of dimensions in our lives.

  For a start, toimprove the internet service will accommodate the progression of educationquality. We take online course as example. In my hometown, there is no such aninternet service. Online course is receiving seas of comments recently, andwhen it comes to the online course, we still will see that certain opponentsplace a big percentage among folks, because online course is a new andincomplete technology that lots of its spheres need to be improved. However, weshould trust ourselves that methods will be devised to deal with or compensatethe negative impact that every new thing has. In fact, based on my ownexperience, online course is not as unfavorable as individuals deem. I took anonline course in summer vacation in America, since I peruse my master degree there;the performance of the online course convinced and dispelled all my confusionand worry. We did communicate with the professor via internet when students gotproblem, and it was not unfamiliar at all, because all the movements and actionsfrom the professor were similar to that in standard course. Taking theadvantage of online course, I am able to study in summer, consequently advance thetime of my graduation, which saves an army of money of international studentslike me. Compare with the disadvantage, the advantage easy overweigh its counterpart.As long as online course get prevalent in my hometown, at least two groups ofpeople will gain benefits from this technology, one is the disabled people whofind inconvenience living on campus, and another one is working people who haveirregular time schedule. For individual, applying online course deliver growingopportunities to characters who desire to receive college education or newestworking skills. For the country, higher education among citizens meansincreasing elites that every country dreams for.

  Additionally, toimprove the internet service will carry benefits to economic advancement. Oneof the exciting stuff that I experienced during my American life was shoppingon Amazon. All sorts of stuff is exhibited on Amazon website, and as long asyou purchased certain item that marked prime, only two days were enough todeliver that item to wherever you lived. The convenient shopping avenue, nodoubt, triggers and stimulates consumers’ shopping desire. Another onlineshopping website is EBay, which is a customer to customer website and a secondhand online market. The earth the Ebay or namely this internet service furnitureis the fundamental elemental for business. For individuals who desire to beginnew business, EBay is an excellent place to start: build reputation and learnexperience   

  From what has beendiscussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that internet service does bringbenefits to education and economy of the city and even the country. As onewhose hometown lacks internet service, it is what I want to change in myhometown.