第一篇argument求指导（题目是第七题）

天要亮啦

题目是第七题：The following is a recommendation from the Board of Directors of Monarch Books.
"We recommend that Monarch Books open a café in its store. Monarch, having been in business at the same location for more than twenty years, has a large customer base because it is known for its wide selection of books on all subjects. Clearly, opening the café would attract more customers. Space could be made for the café by discontinuing the children's book section, which will probably become less popular given that the most recent national census indicated a significant decline in the percentage of the population under age ten. Opening a café will allow Monarch to attract more customers and better compete with Regal Books, which recently opened its own café."
Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered in order to decide whether the recommendation is likely to have the predicted result. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the recommendation.
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求指导！谢谢！！
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普渡哥

One of this argument’s chief question lies in the mention of Regal Books that is used as a comparison with Monarch Books. 这句话有问题。one of  ...用单数？？

天要亮啦

普渡哥 发表于 2013-8-29 10:52
One of this argument’s chief question lies in the mention of Regal Books that is used as a comparis ...

嗯，貌似是question应该改成questions才对，谢谢您！！