OG13 SC47

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OG 13 SC47

In 1713, Alexander Pope began his translation of the Iliad, a work that, taking him seven years until completion, and that literary critic Samuel Johnson- Pope's contemporary, pronounced the greatest translation in any language.

(A) his translation of the Iliad, a work that, taking him seven years until completion, and that literary critic Samuel Johnson, Pope's contemporary, pronounced

(B) his translation of the Iliad, a work that took him seven years to complete and that literary critic Samuel Johnson, Pope's contemporary, pronounced

(C) his translation of the Iliad, a work that had taken seven years to complete and that literary critic Samuel Johnson, Pope's contemporary, pronounced it as

(D) translating the Iliad, a work that took seven years until completion and that literary critic Samuel Johnson, Pope's contemporary, pronounced it as

(E) translating the Iliad, a work that had taken seven years to complete and literary critic Samuel Johnson, Pope's contemporary, pronounced it

OG解释说对于C选项，pronounced后面的it冗余，怎么想也想不通为什么是冗余吖。。。请大神们指教谢谢啦！

还有OG没有提took和had taken到底该用哪个，所以是暗示这道题过去式和过去完成时都是对的嘛？

Joehe2010

a work that SJ pronouced the greatest translation.

a work that SJ pronounced it as greatest translation.

yy20

定语从句中，不要再出现被修饰对象或指代该词的代词。--from Elroy 大神的语法笔记。

foolqq

Joehe2010 发表于 2013-8-24 09:17
a work that SJ pronouced the greatest translation.

a work that SJ pronounced it as greatest transla ...

a work that SJ pronounced it as greatest translation错在哪里？求语法达人解释~

zy08576

foolqq 发表于 2014-3-12 22:52
a work that SJ pronounced it as greatest translation错在哪里？求语法达人解释~

楼上回复了。。定语从句中不要再出现被修饰对象或指代该词的代词~~

vivizm

that 本身就是指代 a work 了，再用it 就重复了；
把 that 还原回去就变成了 a work SJ pronounced that it as greatest translation.
it 就是多余的了。