关于同位语以及名称的问题，OG12-88，0G13-19.求解释！！！！！

rebeccadu1

19. A pioneer journalist, Nellie Bly’s exploits included circling the globe faster than JulesVerne’s fictional Phileas Fogg.

(A) A pioneer journalist, Nellie Bly’s exploitsincluded

(B) The exploits of Nellie Bly, a pioneerjournalist, included

(C) Nellie Bly was a pioneer journalist includingin her exploits the

(D) Included in the pioneer journalist Nellie Bly’sexploits are

(E) The pioneer journalist’s exploits of Nellie Blyincluded

答案为B

88. The lonious Monk, who was a jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work both rooted in the stride-piano tradition of Willie (The Lion) Smith and Duke Ellington, yet in many ways he stood apart from the mainstream jazz repertory.
A) The lonious Monk, who was a jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work both rooted
B) The lonious Monk, the jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work that was rooted both
(C) Jazz pianist and composer The lonious Monk, who produced a body of work rooted
(D) Jazz pianist and composer The lonious Monk produced a body of work that was rooted
E) Jazz pianist and composer The lonious Monk produced a body of work rooted both
这题目的B选项也是用的同位语，为什么在88中是错误答案，在19题目里面就是正确的答案？是the 和a 的区别？还是其实88题目里面的A,B选项用了who 和同位语不够简洁呢？

求大神讲解！！！！

qiongle

19题中 a pioneerjournalist很好的解释了 Nellie Bly的性质，没问题。
而88中同位语不是考点，不是致命的错误错误在后半句中，另外把 Jazz pianist and composer放在 The lonious Monk前面更加简洁，更好，不是说必须得这么做。
两道题的侧重不同，考点不同罢了。

rebeccadu1

qiongle 发表于 2013-8-15 15:46
19题中 a pioneerjournalist很好的解释了 Nellie Bly的性质，没问题。
而88中同位语不是考点，不是致命的错 ...

哦哦。谢谢！~~~