饼干小熊作文贴，求狠批，求指正，9/8考试~8/23更新

FrancisEvens

饼干小熊 发表于 2013-8-21 15:59
8/21 综合 写作小分队 276字

The author in the reading passage recommended three approaches to preven ...

8.20

The author in the reading passage recommended three approaches to prevent the spread of cane toad and reduce their population. However, the professor in lecture asserts that the approaches may not only unsuccessful but also damage the ecosystem.(听力好像说的是“不是达不到效果就是会造成破坏”，不是既……又……） In the lecture, he uses three specific points to support he’s opinion.

In the first place, even though the reading passage proposes(首句提到reading passage时用的过去式，统一一下） that the national fence can be one way(national fence不是way，building fence是way） to prohibit the cane toad to move to the places they have not yet colonized, the lecture points out that the water flow can bring toad eggs to everywhere and young and small cane toads still can move through the fence, which means the mean of erect a national fence is failed.

Moreover, the reading suggests that the toads could be captured and destroyed by large number of volunteers. Even so the professor admits the approach might be useful, he claims that it is not easy to tell the difference between cane toads and native frogs, especially hard to extinguish a kind of in danger native frogs and cane toads when they young（注意到年轻时尤其难区分这点很棒，当时被我忽略掉了）. Thus, the untrained volunteers are likely to captured the in danger frogs by mistake and threaten the survival of native animals.

Finally, despite the reading passage contends that disease-causing virus will specifically harm only the cane toads but not most of the infect species in Australia, the professor indicates that the virus might be bring to central American by other species and hurt the cane toads there. The virus will suffer the whole ecosystem in central and south American because the cane toad is one of the native species and (is）critical to the local ecosystem.

饼干小熊

822 综合 写作小分队 TPO16 227字
The reading passage claims that the science of archaeology was faced with serious problems and limitations in Britain. However, the professor of the lecture states that the New Guide Line passed in 1990s has totally changed the situation and she illustrates the changes in three specific points

First, according to the reading, the builders often uncovered archaeologically valuable sites but proceeded with the construction and did not preserve the artifacts, thus destroyed many precious artifacts. After the New Guide Line been passed, as the professor said, now the new uncovered sites during construction should be examine by archaeology first, if the site has archaeologically valuable, it must be preserved.

Second, even though the reading indicates that financial support for archaeological was inadequate because the short of government founds and grants, and periodic reductions in funding by changing government priorities, the lecture argues that ,by the New Guide Line, the money can be paid by construction company, so now it becomes a huge financial resources for archaeology.

Lastly, the reading passage insists that the difficulty of find a career in archaeology force many people to become unpaid archaeological amateurs. But the professor argues that now there are more paid-works exist than before, all stages in the process of archaeology needs experts to do the research and report to archaeologist. The situation has totally different from the past now.

laneesherry

The reading passage claims that the science of archaeology was faced with serious problems and limitations in Britain. However, the professor of the lecture states that the New Guide Line(the newguide line, 看范文这里并没有大写，不过我也不确定要不要大写，因为关于指南这一点我之前没有听出来) passed in 1990s has totally changed the situation and she illustrates the changes in three specific points

First, according to the reading, the builders often uncovered archaeologically valuable sites but proceeded with the construction and did not preserve the artifacts, thus destroyed many precious artifacts. After the New Guide Line been passed, as the professor said, now the new uncovered sites during construction should be examine by archaeology first, if the site has archaeologically valuable, it must be preserved.

Second, even though the reading indicates that financial support for archaeological was inadequate because the short of government founds and grants, and periodic reductions in funding by changing government priorities, the lecture argues that ,by the New Guide Line, the money can be paid by construction company, so now it becomes a huge financial resources for archaeology.

Lastly, the reading passage insists that the difficulty of find a career in archaeology force many people to become unpaid archaeological amateurs. But the professor argues that now there are more paid-works exist than before, all stages in the process of archaeology needs experts to do the research and report to archaeologist. The situation has totally different from the past now.

该有的点已经全部听到，结构清晰，用词也富于变化，听力的点抓得比我要准得多，请继续加油~

Lexiie

同9.8考试~~一起互改吧~加油