[求助]TWE119 -恳请大家帮忙修改一下，真不知道怎么写才好`

jasonvszh

In daily life, people usually wear different clothes because they always have different careers which have their own distinctive uniforms, attending a party or sport that needs certain clothes for each occasion. Admittedly, people are often influenced by these clothes that they have.

Most teachers have to wear certain clothes when teaching at schools. As a teacher, he (she) always is asked for a high standard the way he (she) behaves during the school time, such as his color, manner, habit and so on. As the matter of fact, students are influenced easily by their teachers. Teachers, organizing a positive behavior, will create a good environment for students to grow up.

Generally, attending some dance parties, people would like to dress up for the special occasion. last week, there was a formal dance party in the school and all the students were invited to join. Most of them wore their best clothes on that day, and the boys behaved like gentlemen when they were in the suits, which is different from their displays at the classes.

Another case is that people need shorts and T-shirts when they are doing sports. No one will wear a suit during a football game, have a jean in the swimming pool, and put on slippers in the running games. For the request of sports clothes is not only a certain rule but also motivate the players to have a best performance.

To earn better life, many people have at least one job, and they have to change clothes all the times meanwhile they perform differently during the works. Obviously, people have different behaviours in diverse clothes because they have to.

这篇文章写了将近一小时，这是我的第三篇习作，觉得好难写，不知道多少字数最合适，恳请大家给点意见~~

[此贴子已经被作者于2004-12-22 3:00:24编辑过]

jasonvszh

希望PUMPKIN JJ 给点意见~~~~~特别是字数上的问题~~~现在很苦恼~~~谢谢了。我会每天上来看的~

tomato

字数300以上吧。 试试给其他朋友修改吧。 互相帮助吧。