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samtii

In 1852 Robert Angus Smith published a detailed report of the chemistry of rain kin a large area around the city of Manchester, England, noting that the closer one came to town, the more the city air would become increasingly acidic.

• Athat the closer one came to town, the more the city air would become increasingly acidic
• Bthat the city air became increasingly acidic the closer one came to town
• Cthat coming closer to town, the city air became increasingly acidic
• Dthat the more the city air became increasingly acidic, the closer one was to town
• Ethe city air becoming increasingly acidic as one would come closer to town
  

这道题选B，我选了E，因为我觉得前面的四个都不对……

关于noting是否一定带that的事情--
来自牛津词典的解释：
1.表示“注意到” that是可以省略的，不过如果note是被动语态（note为及物动词）时that不可省。
    ex：please note (that) the office will be closed on Monday.
2.表示“指出，特别提到”that“不可省--这里专指一个固定搭配:  it is worth noting that....

关于是否可以用would的问题，我看见很多帖子说不可以，因为有过去式……我对于这点是有疑问的：
来自manhattan语法第五版的原文（请看附件1）

我对于A的疑虑是more和increasingly重复；
B是the closer前面是否应该有连词？
C是coming closer to town 错误的修饰了the city air
D是因果倒置，the more应该就近修饰acidic
E没看出有什么问题，noting sth as +某原因  不可以吗？

请高手们不吝赐教……

kiwifoodtown

本题应首先考虑的是不是the more.....,the more.....的结构。

samtii

kiwifoodtown 发表于 2013-5-31 12:06
本题应首先考虑的是不是the more.....,the more.....的结构。

the more……the more……的选项都是错的呀……

kiwifoodtown

samtii 发表于 2013-5-31 12:10
the more……the more……的选项都是错的呀……

A选项，the closer........,the more.........

samtii

kiwifoodtown 发表于 2013-5-31 12:12
A选项，the closer........,the more.........

恩，不过这道题的答案是B……

kiwifoodtown

那要看看了，因为我分析后，和后来看的答案上都是A。

kiwifoodtown

仔细的分析了下，A的确错了，the more和increasingly重复，而且would不合适。也就只有B比较合适了。

bejamin1111

the closer one came to town, the more the city air would become increasingly acidic。这句话后半句有歧义，more有修饰CA的嫌疑，意思为越近，就会有越多的空气，逻辑错误。c中the city 不能作为coming的逻辑主语。e无谓语动词，fragment。就剩下b了。b的结构也有点奇怪。。

kiwifoodtown

bejamin1111 发表于 2013-5-31 12:36
the closer one came to town, the more the city air would become increasingly acidic。这句话后半句有 ...

不好意思，你的解释完全错误：
首先，你对A选项的分析错误，the closer one came to town, the more the city air would become increasingly acidic,是典型的比较状语结构 the more......,the more.......(详细知识点用请自行查阅相关语法资料)，而且，你对这句话的翻译也有错误，其意思应为：离城市越近，城市空气变的越酸。A的错误我在上面已经说明，the more和increasingly重复，而且would用在这里不合适。

其次，对E选项的分析，E选项是有谓语动词的，并不是fragment。它的错误在于city air becoming increasingly acidic as one would come closer to town， the more......,the more.......这一比较状语结构是不能被 as 比较结构来替代的，两者表达的逻辑意思完全不同。

samtii

bejamin1111 发表于 2013-5-31 12:36
the closer one came to town, the more the city air would become increasingly acidic。这句话后半句有 ...

谢谢本的回复，对于more的修饰错误问题，我和你想的一样。