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请教各位一下，综合写作的阅读部分要写多少啊？有时候看TPO的参考范文 感觉某一段都没有写阅读部分 直接就来句so the lecture contradicts the view in the reading passage.....下面是我写的一篇TPO21以及对应的参考范文 求各位大神指导一下！我容易写得超出字数 因为老是怕写不全。。。肿么办呢？
我的TPO21
The reading passage believes planting genetically modified trees in large number will create plenty of benefits. However, the professor in the lecture disagrees and contends that there indeed are some serious problems caused by planting genetically modified trees.
    The professor contradicts the statement in the reading passage that genetically modified tress have more chances to survive because they are more resistant to problems such as pests, and claims that due to the uniformity of genetically modified trees, they may easily die out if exposed to some changes that they never experienced before such as climatic changes or a new type of pest.
    Further, the reading passage maintains that genetically modified trees can bring farmers numbers of economic benefits since they can grow faster, produce greater amount of food and be hardier. Whereas, the professor argues that because the company would charge farmers more each seed of genetically modified trees, and by law farmers have to pay the company every time they plant these trees, it is difficult to gain more benefits from planting genetically modified trees.
    Finally, the professor disputes the third idea in the reading passage that genetically modified trees can meet the demand for wood so that they can save wild trees, and thinks that they can even bring more damages to wild trees since they grow more aggressively and compete for resources with natural trees.
228  超字数了。。。。
范文
In the lecture, the professor claims that although they may be some benefit, planting genetic
modified trees will bring potential problems and costs. She totally opposes the three statements
made in the reading passage.
Firstly, the professor indicates that genetic modified trees may resistant, but this cannot guarantee
their survival. She points out that in fact the unity of genes within genetic modified plant will
increase their likelihood to wipe out when there is some threatening situation. The professor
counters the claim made by the reading passage.
Secondly, the professor opposes the reading passage by pointing out there is hidden cost behind
modification trees. Though genetic modification trees may provide more products or can save
pesticide, their seeds are usually charged at a higher price. In addition, according to the law, a
farmer has to pay for the seed each time they plant the trees. This will not bring any economic
benefit mentioned in the reading passage.
Last but not least, the professor opposes the statement that genetic modification trees will prevent
overexploit of wild trees. In fact, genetic modification trees tend to grow aggressively and can
easily exhaust the resource of normal trees. This will bring disastrous result for the local
vegetation.
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取个霸气的名字

好可怜。。。。。都没人理我。。。。。。。。

perfectends

仔细读OG，谁说超字数了。。。

stacygogogo

综合写作中 阅读部分只写观点就可以了 不需要再详细的写文中论证观点的论据 但是听力部分既要写观点又要写论据 而且论据你要尽量写的跟听力原文一致 这样才会让人家觉得你听得特别懂 特别牛啊 一般按照这个写不会超字数的

小雅要加油哦

我综合写作写了300多一点字，独立写作写了五百多，然后两个GOOD，貌似字数多tends to get 高分~所以我考试的时候就话唠=。=