【新人向】第一次写arguement，借鉴太多OG的句子了，希望能有人帮我看看要怎么提高，谢...

牵狗散步の猫

第一次写arguement，借鉴太多OG的句子了，希望能有人帮我看看要怎么提高，谢...

普渡哥

作为第一篇，very good job. 可以多练练生题，少引用og。你的段落形式挺好的。

The poor quality and terrible smell might tremendously disturb people's daily life and water sports, therefore, but we do not know whether there have been numerous complaints from a wild range of local residents, or just from one or two individuals who has made vast complaints.  

therefore跟but连用？我没读通。。

牵狗散步の猫

普渡哥 发表于 2013-5-15 10:41
作为第一篇，very good job. 可以多练练生题，少引用og。你的段落形式挺好的。

The poor quality and terr ...

啊。。。。这个也许是我搞错了，我当初是这么想的，therefore作为adv放在句首可以，那么放在句中也不错吧？正确的打开方式应该是Therefore  the poor quality and terrible smell might tremendously disturb people's daily life and water sports, therefore, but ...