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因为是第一篇，就跳了一个比较宜人的题目写，也没有限定时间。
写完了看字数，吓一跳，差不多500了。再看表，又吓一跳，整整一个小时。可幸没有太多品错的单词
请各位师兄师姐帮忙看一下。不要求什么文采了，但求工整，语法过关，谢谢！
044 Some people like to travel with a companion. Other people prefer to travel alone. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
Some people prefer to travel alone because they believe that they will have more freedom during the journey: they can decide by themselves where to go, what to eat and where to live, without making any compromise with their companions. On the other hand, other people believe that it will be more fun to travel with others. However, if I were faced with the decision, most probably I will choose to go travel with my family and friends. My reasons to advocate this idea are as follows:
The first and probably the most important reason for traveling with friends is that it allows travelers to share with others what have been seen and experienced in the journey. It is always enjoyable to travel with one or couple of close friends and exchange respective impressions of the new places with each other. For example, I prefer to visit art museums with my friends, by that way I will benefit a lot from exchanging my own ideas with them. By doing so, I not only obtain knowledge of art from the museum, but also from my friends. Besides, to travel as a group sometimes provides us chances to enhance and improve the friendship. It will be such a joy to camp with some close friends and talk about the topics we all interested in.
Another reason I cast my preference to group travel is because it is safer. Although in most of the travel places personal safe of travelers is granted by the local security service. However, when traveling to a totally strange place, any emergency could happen at any time. For instance, it is possible you get injured when you go hiking or climbing a mountain. In case these happens during your trip, your friends will be the most helpful and supportive people surround you. In addition, traveling with a group also reduce the risk of robbery and stealing.
Last but not least, traveling with a group of people is cheaper than travel alone. There often have group discounts for group travelers. From admission tickets to transportation fee, expenses of group travelers are always less than those of the individuals. Besides this, travelers can also save money by sharing hotel room and having dinner together.
It has to be admitted that travel as a group limits some freedom of individual travelers. In order to respect others' opinions, everyone in the group have to make necessary compromise. In the contrary, people who travel alone won't have these scruples, without others' opinions, he can make all decisions by his own. This also gives a good opportunity for him to build a stronger and more independent personality, because there is no friends around he can ask for help to.
As discussed above, I prefer travel with friends or family to travel alone, because it is safer, cheaper and more enjoyable. Although it is less free than travel alone, the advantages are far overweighing it.
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