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clairloo

124.    (31091-!-item-!-188;#058&004372)Whereas the use of synthetic fertilizers has greatly expanded agricultural productivity in many parts of the world, an increase in their use can create serious environmental problems such as water pollution, and their substitution for more traditional fertilizersmay accelerate soil structure deterioration and soil erosion.


(A) an increase in their use can create serious environmental problems such as water pollution, and their substitution for more traditional fertilizers
(B) an increase in their use can create serious environmental problems like water pollution, and if substituted for more traditional fertilizers, it
(C) if these fertilizers are used increasingly, they can create serious environmental problems such as water pollution, and if used as substitutions for more traditional fertilizers, they
(D) the increased usage of these fertilizers can create serious environmental problems such as water pollution, while if substituted for more traditional fertilizers, this substitution
(E) the increased usage of these fertilizers can create serious environmental problems like water pollution, while their substitution for more traditional fertilizers

我选的是E，但答案是A 能看出来A是平行结构 their use和their substitution对应。 E是因为while用得不对么还有 such as和like在做举例讲时是不是都可以的？？求助中 感谢帮助

baoyuyue

个人意见，like是不能用于列举的吧，列举例示要用such as. 记得og12提到过。

kiwifoodtown

个人意见：

本句中，主句主语应为an increase，是an increase in their use can create serious environmental problems，是说fertilizers越来越多的被使用造成了环境问题。

E 选项 主句主语则是usage，the increased usage of these fertilizers 是说fertilizers越来越多的用途，这就不合逻辑意思了。

另外，在举例说明中，GMAT提倡用 such as。还有 while 和and 不能互换使用。

kiwiya

赞同楼上的三个论述

spoon0212

kiwifoodtown 发表于 2013-2-17 10:36
个人意见：本句中，主句主语应为an increase，是an increase in their use can create serious environment ...

C不对吗

kiwifoodtown

spoon0212 发表于 2013-7-9 21:10
C不对吗

不对，句子结构错误，包括断句错误，和并列结构的错误。

spoon0212

spoon0212 发表于 2013-7-9 21:10
C不对吗

恩恩，懂了，谢谢，看起来是平行的选择的时候快就没注意

吴越女

还是应该选A。因为E选项中的their指代不清，可以指代前面所有的复数名词，如：fertilizers, problems. A选项很好地避免了这个问题

niclively

请问这里面的的D为什么错了？

kiwifoodtown

niclively 发表于 2014-2-13 21:50
请问这里面的的D为什么错了？

D选项的错误是 从句while if substituted for more traditional fertilizers, this substitution....中 substituted 应该对应修饰 this substitution，这样就造成了句意上的重复和表达混乱，所以D选项错误。