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alexcanada

123 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People should read only those books that are about real events, real people, and established facts. Use specific reasons and details to support your opinion.

Nowadays, it is popular that more and more celebrated people publish their autobiographies, which contain their successful experience, choices at the crisis, and their world values. Therefore,    most of us believe that we will absorb a amount of nutrition by reading this kind of books. However, someone doubt that we just can make progress by reading only those books that are about real events, real people, and establish fact. Actually, from my position, I claim that we can gain more benefits from science fiction, humourous stories and cantons as well.

The main reason for my propensity is that some kind fictional books bring us more pleasure which real one cannot achieve. In such a competitive society, most of us demand to relax after a whole day wok ore study. Thereby, it is inconceivable for us to read some academic papers or documents that make us bored. One of the ideal entertainments is real some humourous stories or cantons. Thus, We can find a great number of funny jokes from them. We will dwell on the worries about school or work without them.

Another reason can be seen by every person is that the fictional stories will bring us more meaningful aspects. As we know, every culture has a variety of apologues which tell us different meaning by a fictional stories. It not only influences adults but also the children in a vivid vehicle. Some of them include exaggerated contents which is more impressive than the true ones. Consequently, we can also reap many benefits from the fictional literature.

In conclusion, although reading real literature is a good way to learn, we cannot deny that fictional ones also bring us many benefits such as pleasure and impressive learning means. To sum up, I strong believe that we also should read some fictional books.

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以下是引用alexcanada在2004-11-19 12:48:00的发言：

123 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People should read only those books that are about real events, real people, and established facts. Use specific reasons and details to support your opinion.

Nowadays, it is popular not uncommon that more and more celebrated people public figures publish their autobiographies, which contain their successful experience, choices at the crisis, and their world values(个人觉得语法上并列，可内容上不并列）. Therefore,    most of us believe that we will absorb a amount of nutrition by reading this these kind of books. However, someone doubts that we just can make progress by reading only those books that are about real events, real people, and established fact. Actually, from my position, I claim that we can gain more benefits from science fictions, humourous stories and cantons as well.

The main reason for my propensity is that some kind fictional books bring us more pleasure which real one cannot achieve. In such a competitive society, most of us demand to relax after a whole day wok ore study. Thereby, it is inconceivable unbelievable for us to read some academic papers or documents that make us boredboring. One of the ideal entertainments is real some humourous stories or cantons. Thus, We can find a great number of funny jokes from them. We will dwell on the worries about school or work without them.

Another reason can be seen by every person is that the fictional stories will bring us more meaningful aspects. As we know, every culture has a variety of apologues which tell us different meaning by a fictional stories. It not only influences adults but also the children in a vivid vehicle. Some of them include exaggerated contents which is more impressive than the true ones. Consequently, we can also reap many benefits from the fictional literature.

In conclusion, although reading real literature is a good way to learn, we nobody(结论要强烈） cannot deny that fictional ones readings materials (下结论的时候指名道姓好点） also bring us many benefits such as pleasure and impressive learning means. To sum up Therefore, I strongly believe that we also should read some fictional books.

有些词用的怪，我自己不推荐信东方说的用word2000里面同义词功能来替换。那样环出来巨不地道。

动词用得不好。动词用的好的文章要比形容词用的好的文章有力得多。这也是为什么简历中要求句首尽量是动词。for example:记得有个黑人说偷东西:拿了就跑-take and run! 简单，生动，呵呵。

新斑竹的第一次，多包涵

zhuangyuchuan

hncsxj斑竹mm挺认真,支持一下!

Waiting for your excellent service again!

alexcanada

看来是有好多地方要药改进， 斑竹能不能将一下动词的用法  

谢谢

guandream

新斑竹的第一次，good job