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在家工作好还是在公司工作好？
在公司工作好。1、效率高2、设备齐全(方便，省钱)3、可以与同事交流，不与世隔绝
Currently, turbulent economic environment and rapid technological change, massive amounts of individuals intend to deal with their work at home. Several virtues it may have, but from my perspective, working in the office is superior to it. Three different dimensions will be demonstrated and explained to testify my position.


First of all, working in the office will be efficiency. When we doing things at home, the task may invariable be slow down because of the extremely comfortable environment. We are likely to be distracted by snakes, television and so on. According to a statistics, ninety percent of people working at home can’t work efficient as them work in their office. It primarily because that it is hard for people to avoid temptations without other people beside. As is known to as all, efficiency is extremely vital for people in current. It can decide whether a person success or not. It is intensely possible that just a few days last from others one could loss a precious opportunity and make his value all in vain.


In addition, in the cooperation, there are enough equipment for staff to use. These are what you can’t get from at home. If you are tapping a paper, and then you must print the paper out, but you haven’t any printer, so you have to go down stairs and find a print shop, and you certainly have to pay for money. What a troubled thing it is! Nevertheless, if you in your office, you just need to turn around and get the printer. Accordingly, working in the office is more convenient.


Finally, working in the cooperation, one can invariably connect with outside world. Face to face communication is of great significance in a person’s life. Every one craves for love and care about others, and no one love to be left alone. Besides, we can not only get strength and support from our colleges, but also can mutually promote goal’s accomplishment. Moreover, connecting with outside world, one can’t be leave over by the rapidly developing world. Obviously, there are many exotic things generate in society everyday and even every hour. Contacting with world, we can get information of the world.


To sum up, working in the office is a superior choice for the people desiring to have a significant achievement. People should be reasonable enough when they intend to find a best working place.

Rainbamboo666

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Governments should focus its budgets more on environmental protection than on economic development.

同意。1、环境对于人类很重要2、环境关系到人类的未来3、只注重经济发展会将环境破坏的更快（恶性循环）
As the turbulent economic environment and rapid expansion of human settlement, the condition of human living space is getting intensely decrease. The activity of human being extremely influences our common homeland negatively. So how to distribute governments’ budgets sparked a heated discussion. From my perspective, I intensely propose that government should pour more attention into environmental protection. Three different dimensions will be demonstrated and explained to testify my position.
First of all, environment matters a lot to human living. It is well known that human derives from nature. And we rely on nature to survive. It is nature that offers human the resources to daily live on. However, from long time ago when agriculture and industry were becoming widespread, human started clearing forests and produced a lot of extra gases. Environment was getting into an awful position. They totally not realize that what they destroy provided all living being with entire resources. Without a good environment, we can’t have a better life.
Furthermore, environment highly related to human’s future lives. As is known to all, nature resources like oil, natural gas, coal and so on can’t be recycled. It means that if we get to over use that, it may not generate again, at least in the human’s time. As the rapid development of industry and economic today, these resources are getting much less. In this way of development, these resources will be exhausted. What the human man relies on will vanish ever since. So, what the human live on? What we try to get the resources from? No one has answers. So we can see the protection of environment should be highly valued.
Finally, pour more attention into economic development will result in vicious circle. Because that growing of economic will damages the condition more quickly. There must be one day that the awful condition leads human have to spend much more money than today’s on environmental protection. Nevertheless, the condition will not be totally renewed. Meantime, the economic keeps going forward without a change. The environment soon will be getting worse and worse. So, the day will come at which the speed of human renew will never catch up with the speed of nature damaging.
To sum up, I maintain that government should focus its budgets on environmental protection. Human should realize that protection is kind of put-in as well as rewarding. We should protect what we need instead of destroying it.

Rainbamboo666

Which of the following do you think contribute most to an enjoyable vacation:
1. good food 2. good location 3. good friends to travel with. Select one and give your reasons.
选3。1、快乐可以和朋友一起分享2、遇到问题解决的更快（彼此沟通方便；意见通常一致）3、留下美好的回忆
Currently, massive amounts of people go to vacation. And everyone has its own favor. Some support that good food plays an important role in vacation. Some insist that good location is of great significance to him. As to me, I will definitely choose accompanying with my good friends. Several dimensions will be demonstrated and explained to testify my position.

First of all, accompanying with friends, I can share all the happiness with them. I am a person loves to share. When I was a six-year-old girl, my mom told me that sharing is the happiest things that you can’t get from other materials. After many years, I still remember her word which exerts a significant impact upon me. When I am on a vacation, I would love to accompany with my friends and appreciate the sense passing from our eyes. Meanwhile, we are inclined to talking about the funny things we meet. We may laugh about the story and change to other countless topics without caring about all the troubles in life. At the dinner time, we can imagine ourselves as elegant gourmets and share the particular local food together.

In addition, together with good friend, problems can be solved out quickly. If going vacation with a stranger or a person you don’t familiar with, one is likely to feel lost when meeting difficulties. Nevertheless, as good friends, we have a better knowledge to one another. Instead of any other people, we can rapidly understand each other’s words and deal with the puzzle fast. Plus, it is good friends that are much able to have the identical viewpoint. Accordingly, it will spend us less time on decision making. Instead, we can deal with the puzzle as soon as possible.

Finally, it can offer me sweet memory if we go with good friends. We are inclined to make happy poses and take miraculous amounts of pictures. After the vacation or several years later, I can enjoy the sense of the past days. I believe that it will leave me an unforgettable memory that nothing can compare with. When I am an old woman, I still can enjoy the happy time just like trenching in the sun of youth. Moreover, the happy time along with good friends can stimulate my confidence and enthusiasm in my life. And I’m likely to face the difficulty more positive.

To sum up, along with good friends, one can enjoy a better vacation, primarily because the sense of sharing, easier to deal with puzzles and leaving a marvelous memory.

Rainbamboo666

Disagree or agree：it is impossible to be completely honest with your friend.

不同意。1、诚实好，但是完全的诚实会造成社交障碍。说话太直。2、适当的谎言会帮朋友缓解痛苦。考试考砸了。
Almost all individual has friends. But the means of getting along with friends vary from person to person. Some support that being completely honest is of great significant to their friends. Others hold the idea that it is unnecessary to keep entire honest with friends. From my perspective, the latter one is superior to the former one. Several different dimensions will be demonstrated and explained to testify my position.

First of all, being completely honest will be a. obvious obstacle in making friends. I don’t stand in the line that people should cheat their friend or not being honest. As everyone accepted, honest is reputed to be the basic principle of social interaction. And I strongly propose that honesty is the virtue that every individual should have. However, almost all people lied to their friends in many situations using different reasons. But, I don’t believe they are willing to cheat friends on purpose or possess any vicious consideration. Being completely honest but not honest will be an instrument to damage the relationship with others. For example, if one of you friends having a new hair style and want you to assess it in front of her boyfriend, but you hold that the hair is so ugly, and you frankly tell her the idea without any concealing. As a result, the relationship may be hurt to some extent or even be broken. Accordingly, the complete honesty influence the friendship negatively

In addition, lie is an avoidably instrument to solace the sorrow of friends in the given situation. Here is a typical experience of me in my three grad of primary school. One of my friends in the class was in hospital because of a brain disease. A group of her friend including me went to see her. Then, when I receive the information that her illness convert into cancer, I was totally stunned. But, after a discussion, everyone believes that keeping the secret to my ill friend. It is because that we just try to encourage her, hoping her to have enthusiasm to life even the result seems negative. Surprisingly, my friend was increasingly better ever since. After that, I learned that the kind lie can alleviate friend’s sorrow and give her confidence to defeat sorrow and pain.

To sum up, honesty is a double-edged sword. We’d better be honest to our friends but not entirely honest to extent because it may hurt friends and ourselves.

Rainbamboo666

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Nowadays it is easier to maintain good health than in the past.

不同意。及时医药技术发展，但仍有其他更多的原因导致。1、食品安全2、环境恶化3、劳累，虽然方便很多，但是人们却越来越忙碌，人口增长，每个人都需要奋斗，起的更早，谁的更晚，因为过于依赖于医疗
Healthy plays the most important role in human’s life. But, currently, the people are less health than the past. Although the rapid development in the medical science and massive improvement in other facets of technology, there exists more extra reason threaten the human’s healthy. Three points of different dimension will be demonstrated and explained to testify my position.
First of all, the food security influence our health negatively. In recent years, industry develops in a turbulent rate. There are increasingly more food issue leading to people in health problem. What’s more? Many people die from the toxic food. Such a dangerous situation we are in, and it become more and more serious in recent years. So food security is a tremendous reason to threaten the people’s health.
In addition, environmental vicious circle is another reason leading the decline of human’s health. In the past day, the natural condition is much more better than now. Maybe many people in the past suffer from the hunger and the natural catastrophe. But the population of the disaster can’t match with the environmental worsen today. Almost from the industry revolution, human cleared the forest and produce vast extra gases to the atmosphere. Untill now, the gases in keeping increase, and it cased a terrible environment for human to live. Human itself have no idea that what they destroy also is what they relies on.
Finally, the massive pressure of today’s people is more than the people in the past. Even though, the life style is getting much more simple and convenient. But it doesn’t means that we don’t need to do much. On the contrary, as a result of increasing population, people need more effort’s and vigor to compete with others. People need to get up earlier and stay up later. Students have to contrive for a better future. Adults have to keeping the family running. Everyone spare all his efforts to do his work.
To sum up, people in today are less health than people in the past. To make it a better life, human should improve in the aspects of environment protection, medicine and reducing stress.

Rainbamboo666

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Nowadays it is easier to maintain good health than in the past.

不同意。及时医药技术发展，但仍有其他更多的原因导致。1、食品安全2、环境恶化3、劳累，虽然方便很多，但是人们却越来越忙碌，人口增长，每个人都需要奋斗，起的更早，谁的更晚，因为过于依赖于医疗
Healthy plays the most important role in human’s life. But, currently, the people are less health than the past. Although the rapid development in the medical science and massive improvement in other facets of technology, there exists more extra reason threaten the human’s healthy. Three points of different dimension will be demonstrated and explained to testify my position.
First of all, the food security influence our health negatively. In recent years, industry develops in a turbulent rate. There are increasingly more food issue leading to people in health problem. What’s more? Many people die from the toxic food. Such a dangerous situation we are in, and it become more and more serious in recent years. So food security is a tremendous reason to threaten the people’s health.
In addition, environmental vicious circle is another reason leading the decline of human’s health. In the past day, the natural condition is much more better than now. Maybe many people in the past suffer from the hunger and the natural catastrophe. But the population of the disaster can’t match with the environmental worsen today. Almost from the industry revolution, human cleared the forest and produce vast extra gases to the atmosphere. Untill now, the gases in keeping increase, and it cased a terrible environment for human to live. Human itself have no idea that what they destroy also is what they relies on.
Finally, the massive pressure of today’s people is more than the people in the past. Even though, the life style is getting much more simple and convenient. But it doesn’t means that we don’t need to do much. On the contrary, as a result of increasing population, people need more effort’s and vigor to compete with others. People need to get up earlier and stay up later. Students have to contrive for a better future. Adults have to keeping the family running. Everyone spare all his efforts to do his work.
To sum up, people in today are less health than people in the past. To make it a better life, human should improve in the aspects of environment protection, medicine and reducing stress.

Rainbamboo666

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