OG12 #105 求问这些modifier都用来修饰什么的

kwonku

Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully
coordinating them with her narratives, capitalized on
her keen observation and love of the natural world.

这是原句，从这个错误的句子来看，in her book illiustrations应该是修饰capitalized这个动作的，意在限定一个范围；而carefully coordinating。。。这个就讨厌了：要修饰capitalized的话，从逻辑上来讲，不可能是结果，但也不应该是描述这个动作；而往前看，illustration，修饰这个名词倒是比较合理的，这样子这个意思就大致理出来了--正解是：
In her book illustrations, which she carefully
coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter

大家说我这样分析对吗？？

TerraceHo

Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, capitalized on her keen observation and love of the natural world.

僅從語法的角度，沒有任何meaning成份--俺覺得是這樣分析的：
1、in her book illustrations修飾bp--bp跟book illustrations之間有什麽關係嗎？hmm...bp在book illustrations裏面。
2、coordinating的位置表示它修飾的不會是capitalized，而是illustrations。

open to discussion^^~