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princessd

You have enough money to purchase either a house or a business. Which would you choose to buy? Give specific reasons to explain your choice.

A house or a company,which would be your choice? As far as I concerned,if I could afford to buy a house or a business,I would choose the latter without any heistation.

Firstly,a business of my own will enrich my life and make it meaningful.One one hand,I will devote myself to my business in order to be successful.Therefore,I have to sovle things dealing with many fields such as produce,sell, human resource,etc.,which will enlarge my scope of knowledge.On the other hand,my family will be pround of me because of my achievement on business.My father and mother need not be afraid how I make a living.

Secondly,my company will be one part of the compositions which make up of the social economic undoubtedly.The development of my company will contribute to the social economic to some extend.For instance, it can offer more job opportunities,create more tax with the scale expanding.Meanwhile,if I possess a company,I can do many good things to the public such as supporting art activities,spending money protecting the evironment.

Moreover,if I am able to manage the company very well,I would have enough money to do a lot of things----travelling,reeducation even including buy a house.

Admittedly,being a boss will be more burdensome and busier than being a employer.By an large,I would be glad to own a business of my own and enjoy the accomplishment that it brings.

另外，能不能帮我罗列几个for example的同义词，总觉得用于举例的连接词不够用，谢谢！

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