Since the start of space age, more and more littering has occured in orbits near Earth, often because of the intentional discarding of lens caps, packing material , fuel tanks and payload covers.
a) same b) orbits near Earth have become more and more littered , often from c) orbits near Earth became littered more and more, often resulting from d) there have been more and more littering of orbits near Earth, often because of e) there had been littering more and more of orbits near Earth, often with
这道题开头用了since，整个句子应该使用现在完成时态 根据事态排除后剩下A和B。 A选项more and more littering has occured in orbits near Earth, often because of the intentional discarding of lens caps, packing material , fuel tanks and payload covers. 问题出在because of上面。because of表示因果，好像在说international discarding 导致了 lettering occurred行为 含义不对 B选项，often from作为状语修饰的是前面句子的动词have become more and more ...
Since the start of space age, more and more littering has occured in orbits near Earth, often because of the intentional discarding of lens caps, packing material , fuel tanks and payload covers.
a) same b) orbits near Earth have become more and more littered , often from c) orbits near Earth became littered more and more, often resulting from d) there have been more and more littering of orbits near Earth, often because of e) there had been littering more and more of orbits near Earth, often with
答案是B。NN帮助分析下为什么B是对的行不？from这是什么用法。。。。
-- by 会员 slr257 (2012/11/24 2:22:48)
A. X because of Y中，X和Y不能是一个事物，这里littering就是指the intentional discarding，所以不能用because of; B.“，介词结构”做adverbial modifier，修饰前面的have become more and more littered C."became littered more and more"的意思是littered的频率越来越高，含义错；resulting from 比较特殊，只能做noun modifier,这里没有对应的先行词~（ps:ron说过因为resulting from只能做noun modifier,所以是不会出现前面有逗号的情况的：http://www.manhattangmat.com/forums/a-study-of-food-resources-in-the-north-pacific-between-1989-t1061.html） D.have主谓不一致，because of 错误同A E.littering more and more of orbits语义不对，more and more修饰了orbits；with修饰Earth或者前面there had been逻辑都不对；had been没有对应的过去时间点，时态错误
B和C咱来比较一下：因为前面出现since这个信号词，意味着使用完成时态（C错）；more and more是放在littered前还是后，咱都来看一下，意思区别： Orbits become more and more littered.——orbits受污染的程度越来越严重。 Orbits become littered more and more. —— 受污染的orbits数量越来越多。 郑重修饰问题，还是要看动作着的初衷是什么，根据A来推测，一定是程度，而非数量。（C又错）
还有一个类的修饰问题：resulting from和from哪个更好，resulting from通常应该直接有个名词性的东西修饰，如果是逗号加resulting from通常会使用as a result of。
D选项：因为more and more littering of orbits其实是单数,真正的主语放在了动词后面，所以have这个词应该为has。 E选项：首先had有时态问题，其次littering more and more of orbits排序有问题，应该是more and more littering of orbits 或者 littering of orbits more and more,more and more不能插到中间来。
B和C咱来比较一下：因为前面出现since这个信号词，意味着使用完成时态（C错）；more and more是放在littered前还是后，咱都来看一下，意思区别： Orbits become more and more littered.——orbits受污染的程度越来越严重。 Orbits become littered more and more. —— 受污染的orbits数量越来越多。 郑重修饰问题，还是要看动作着的初衷是什么，根据A来推测，一定是程度，而非数量。（C又错）
还有一个类的修饰问题：resulting from和from哪个更好，resulting from通常应该直接有个名词性的东西修饰，如果是逗号加resulting from通常会使用as a result of。
-- by 会员 sisichen666 (2012/11/24 17:10:18)
这里有个疑问， 我的理解 S V O, comma+Ving结构， Ving 不可以用来表达 为SVO 原因，只可以用来表达SVO的结果 ， 不知道这样理解对不？
B和C咱来比较一下：因为前面出现since这个信号词，意味着使用完成时态（C错）；more and more是放在littered前还是后，咱都来看一下，意思区别： Orbits become more and more littered.——orbits受污染的程度越来越严重。 Orbits become littered more and more. —— 受污染的orbits数量越来越多。 郑重修饰问题，还是要看动作着的初衷是什么，根据A来推测，一定是程度，而非数量。（C又错）
还有一个类的修饰问题：resulting from和from哪个更好，resulting from通常应该直接有个名词性的东西修饰，如果是逗号加resulting from通常会使用as a result of。
-- by 会员 sisichen666 (2012/11/24 17:10:18)
这里有个疑问， 我的理解 S V O, comma+Ving结构， Ving 不可以用来表达 为SVO 原因，只可以用来表达SVO的结果 ， 不知道这样理解对不？
-- by 会员 abjure (2012/11/24 19:19:28)
我开始也在思考这个问题，但是我觉得comma+Ving，如果ving直接为内容而内容又是原因（而不像这里的resulting from不是直接的内容，而是带有连接感觉的词），那么是不对的~ 但是这里是resulting from，假设它可以做adverbial modifier,可能可以理解为伴随动作或者伴随状态~ 我查了ron的解释，这里主要的问题是resulting from不能做adverbial modifier~ 就像sisi说的，一般要变成as a result of/with the result that.../...(暂时就想到这两个)，而这两个也不涉及comma+ving结构~ ron对resulting from的解释：consensus is that you just can't have 'resulting from' after a comma.
you can have it as an adjective modifier, without a comma - as in the following sentence: the flooding resulting from the abnormally strong storms had left six inches of standing water in the street. note that the boldface is an adjective modifier, modifying 'flooding'.
it appears that on the gmat, as well as in standard written english in general, 'resulting from' after a comma is generally considered unacceptable.
这道题开头用了since，整个句子应该使用现在完成时态 根据事态排除后剩下A和B。 A选项more and more littering has occured in orbits near Earth, often because of the intentional discarding of lens caps, packing material , fuel tanks and payload covers. 问题出在because of上面。because of表示因果，好像在说international discarding 导致了 lettering occurred行为 含义不对 B选项，often from作为状语修饰的是前面句子的动词have become more and more ...
-- by 会员 MiaZhang (2012/11/24 9:47:49)
这样的from用法好奇怪啊。。。相当于是说: The ocean is polluted, from the trash. 为什么这里不用by，through，而是用from？？？非常纠结！多谢各位回复！
B和C咱来比较一下：因为前面出现since这个信号词，意味着使用完成时态（C错）；more and more是放在littered前还是后，咱都来看一下，意思区别： Orbits become more and more littered.——orbits受污染的程度越来越严重。 Orbits become littered more and more. —— 受污染的orbits数量越来越多。 郑重修饰问题，还是要看动作着的初衷是什么，根据A来推测，一定是程度，而非数量。（C又错）
还有一个类的修饰问题：resulting from和from哪个更好，resulting from通常应该直接有个名词性的东西修饰，如果是逗号加resulting from通常会使用as a result of。
-- by 会员 sisichen666 (2012/11/24 17:10:18)
这里有个疑问， 我的理解 S V O, comma+Ving结构， Ving 不可以用来表达 为SVO 原因，只可以用来表达SVO的结果 ， 不知道这样理解对不？
-- by 会员 abjure (2012/11/24 19:19:28)
这种理解还挺特别的，嘿嘿， 我觉得还是当做一般的状语修饰来理解吧，既然是svo，ving——ving是作状语，那么ving去掉的话应该是不影响句子含义的对吧》》那么我们把resulting blabla去掉明显是含义缺陷； 从逻辑语义也是讲不通的（我觉得LS想说的应该是这个意思：伴随结果，这道题最后来个伴随原因了呢，我是归到logic里啦)：“结果A results from 原因B，而A, resulting from B可以理解为：A先发生，B后发生（伴随）——那不就奇了怪了：结果是......,之后伴随的原因是......——奇葩的表达 同理，伴随cause就可以这么用，因为“原因causes 结果”——这种SVO, causing B，逻辑意思是正确的。
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