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P1 People are now easier to become educated than in the past.
I was born in a mediocre community, and is it not an unwonted thing that every kid in each family usually have right to attend a school once age qualified. It is really impressed me almost overall parents hold the brief—“ the knowledge changes fate and education influence life”

Admittedly, it is believe that education is not the exclusive approach to success. Thus it seems reasonable more people tend to keep away from traditional education system to save time, and enter the work market directly. Meanwhile, competition of university admission becomes more and more fierce. Student from all over the world run for a seat in a first-class university like Harford.
However, in terms of people’s accessibility to education, the threshold have been downgraded is an undisputable face because of education institution’s extension and high-tech advantage.

To begin with, the number of education institutions has increased dramatically in past year, allowing a greater number of individuals to receive education in different level. Apart from the institution number being soared in past century, the academic field has been carefully subdivided to certain branches, covering a wilder but more specific field. In tourism industry, for instance, people used to neglect academic research in this field, let alone to seat in a class room and have a class from a professor. However, people now get the opportunity of establishing a systematic knowledge net from world-class university—Cornell university for example. To sum up, the expansion of education institution covers more people under education.

In addition, the emergence of high-tech, like internet, provides adequate justification for my opinion. Taking advantage of Internet, more people are able to receive decent education online and possess instant access to knowledge. Unfortunately, people in the past had to spend several days in libraries when they were trying to search for some relative information to certain subject. However, with a simple click on computer, people nowadays greatly shorten the process on searching and collecting education material, obviously, making it easier for people to be educated.

As far as I concern, in an increasingly competitive job market, people are initiatively incentive to access education. Employers are willing to pay a premium to high qualified applicants. For example, in campus recruitment, many companies desire students who are competent in more than one language, and offer higher salaries to attract those students. Even if sometimes the other job applicants has plentiful work experiences, To some extend, education degree is accepted by employers as a proof of competence in certain field. Therefore, I, under this condition, have to initiative to equip myself with education experience.

Overall, not only the education is more accessible than before, taking advantage of technological improvement enables modern individual to gain education without any restriction. Thus people are definitely more possible to become education than in the past.

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P2  In some circumstances, patience is not a good thing and instead we should take action at once.


Action depends on thought. Even thought there are no two people are exactly identical, in general, people can be categorized into two types---with patient personality, which means people possess strong tolerance ability and with impatient personality, which presents as taking action impulsively.

Despite it is believed that a impatient manager, who is also an instant decision-maker, is always more admired by employers to some extend, because employers can get instruction in need immediately. Meanwhile, a group of impulsive decision-makers can save more time from discussion. However, in terms of the effectiveness in making decision, patience, which means a quality of tolerant, re-thinking behavior and good-nature emotion, is a favorable choice in certain condition.

Firstly, in the public relation field, patience, especially from the tolerance aspect, is a essential principle for success. Patience in international public relation means take different voices into consideration, balance them and give different replies to various sides. Apart from multiple considerations, in public relation industry, the mild attitude is also a inevitable quality. The mild quality is an element of patience. For example, the island dispute issue between China and Japan has intensified in recent days. If Chinese government makes a decision by emotion, the war should have already broken out,  it is a no disputable fact a large amount of people will be in miserable life that leading by war. To sum up, patience, as an essential norm in public relations issue, is worth to be rewarding.

Secondly, for a chemical experiment class, as far as i concerned, patience is a vital quality for students, or it will be really dangerous if anyone take action without thinking. As far as I concerned, I used to design a experiment to test which two reagents are best partner for making a certain plastic. Only by examine possibly alternative reagents one by one, and day by day, I have the chance to figure out the result and make it convincing. Otherwise, without patience, it is possible that I have already given up my project at the first day or to some extend, leading to a lab accident, which result from I lose my patience and choose a substance adding to the tube randomly.

All in all, dispute an impulsive decision maker is more efficient in problem-solve, however, the effectiveness is a more essential value in certain condition, chemical experiment and public issue for example. Thus, patience is an inevitable quality and is worth to be put in the first place.

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