求各位牛牛帮改CV~~凌乱嘈杂的第一稿，附完整文档@@虽然内容不咋地但格式还是不错滴~~经历君你还可以更水一点吗可以吗可以吗~~

chachasmailbox

                                                                           
                   目标是荷兰马大的internationalbusiness（Finance）以及可能阿大蒂尔堡自由大总之是荷兰这块儿。。。但确实没啥相关经历只好勉强攒满一页。。
Education  
09/2009 – present  XX University/ School of Economics/ Finance                   China
· Candidate for the degree of Bachelor of Finance in June 2013.
           Core curriculum: International Finance, International Settlement, Corporate  Finance,   Econometrics, Investment Banking
           Major GPA：88.3/100                          Rank: 21/111
· Minor in Applied Psychology
09/2012  - present University of Minho/ Department of Economics and Business Portugal
· To perform a period of exchange study until February, 2013
· Attending general courses in the field of management and economics.

Experience
06/2011-07/2012     Carried out a student project about the Postal Savings Bank of China
· Interviewed the stuff  and managers in four sub-branches and summarized their views
· Collected the data of the distribution of the Postal Savings Bank of China and analysed its correlation with local GDP and population density
03/2012-05/2012     Participated in "Challenge Cup" Entrepreneurship Contest
· Improved the business proposal by providing a thorough analysis of the competitors in the particular industry that we intended to get involved in
· Summarized and presented our research and finding to the team managing director  
07/2012-2012/08     Huarong Securities- Summer Internship
· Introduced to potential customer about the latest services and products
· Assisted the manager in providing monthly report about customer's investment account
06/2012-07/2012     Museum of Finance, China- Volunteered Interpreter
· Introduced to visitors detailed knowledge about  the items in four different exhibitions at least once per week

Awards
· Attained Outstanding Student Scholarship for three consecutive years (2009-2012),
     amounting to a total of 7000RMB
· Won Excellence Award in National English Competition for College Students (2010)
· Won Excellence Award in "Challenge Cup" Entrepreneurship Contest (2011)

yzw082482

建议把经历中Participated in改成Won Excellence Award in "Challenge Cup" Entrepreneurship Contest 。个人觉得这样才比较吸引眼球。楼主打算去哪所学校啊？