请教OG13语法47题~

lylblue

In 1713, Alexander Pope began his translation of the lliad, a work that, taking him seven years until completion, and that literary critic Samuel Johnson, Pope's contemporary, pronounced the greatest translation in any language.
A.his translation of the lliad, a work that, taking him seven years until completion, and that literary critic Samuel Johnson, Pope's contemporary, pronounced
B.his translation of the lliad, a work that took him seven years to complete and that literary critic Samuel Johnson, Pope's contemporary, pronounced
C.his translation of the lliad, a work that had taken seven years to complete and that literary critic Samuel Johnson, Pope's contemporary, pronounced it as
D.translating the lliad, a work that took seven years until completion and that literary critic Samuel Johnson, Pope's contemporary, pronounced it as
E.translating the lliad, a work that had taken seven years to complete and literary critic Samuel Johnson, Pope's contemporary, pronounced it


OG上给的答案是B，但是我觉得B中work是可数名词，只能代表lliad这个作品而不能代表translation这项工作，从而句意就存在问题了吧？
我选的是E，我觉得这里就可以把work理解为lliad这个作品了，而且句意也很明确~
真心请教各位~~~马上要上战场的人桑不起啊~~~
谢谢^^

mjiehu

e错在 had taken，比主动词began还要早

sisichen666

LZ先分析句子结构吧，a work引导同位语从句，修饰the Iliad，that…and that…并列修饰work，第二个that引导的从句中，that(指代a work)做pronounced的宾语，the greatest translation…是宾补。

sisichen666

(A) taking him seven years until completion做了插入语，使得a work that后面的that从句没有主干内容；take sb. some time until completion中，completion的动作发出者不明。
(B) Correct；sth. that sb. pronounce sth.中pronounce的宾语that已经前置，同时也说明了定语从句先行词在定从中做宾语，在考虑平行、无歧义的情况下，有时需要补出关系代词。
(C) 使用过去完成时态错误，过去完成时表达了had taken发生在began以前："书在开始翻以前就被翻译好了"，很荒谬；take seven years to complete中take后面省略宾语him使得谁在complete不清楚，好像是指所有人；pronounce it as …it多余，且固定搭配错误，pronounce sb/sth sth中没有as。
(D) a work变成了同位修饰the Iliad，而不是the translation，错误；take后面省略宾语him使得谁在complete不清楚；until completion将take与complete的关系割裂，造成completion的动作发出者不明，同时使得前面take seven years没有意义；pronounce it as …it多余，且固定搭配错误，pronounce sb/sth sth中没有as。
(E) a work变成了同位修饰the Iliad，而不是the translation，错误；使用过去完成时态错误，过去完成时表达了had taken发生在began以前："书在开始翻以前就被翻译好了"，很荒谬；and后面并没有采用与前面that平行的方式，而是重新起了一个分句，使得句式awkward

lylblue

如果把work理解为作品，那么写作品当然比翻译作品began得要早，用过去完成时就没有问题了吧？

sisichen666

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DUKB24

LZ去下一下dukb的千行OG......帮助会很大

-- by 会员 sisichen666 (2012/10/17 12:18:27)

看来我得定期付费给sisi当市场营销官了

lylblue

我表示把translation理解为“翻译”这项工作了，看来应该理解为“译文”才对~
谢谢各位NN~CD真强大啊~

sisichen666

LZ去下一下dukb的千行OG......帮助会很大

-- by 会员 sisichen666 (2012/10/17 12:18:27)

看来我得定期付费给sisi当市场营销官了

-- by 会员 DUKB24 (2012/10/17 12:19:49)

伦家木有意见呦。。。。D哥。。。。

mjiehu

完成的是work，还是translation?