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ycy601

答案是D 吧

E.      A Raisin in the Sun, by Lorraine Hansberry, won the New York Drama Critics’ Circle Award in 1959, and later made it

E中，一方面BY 短语有歧义，另一方面同一个主语
            A Raisin in the Sun， won 后又说made it 感觉怪怪的，如果真要这么说的话，是不是应该说成是  and later made itself   into both a film and a musical

不知道理解E的错误对不对，请NN 指正

 

jordan0214

by Lorraine Hansberry 没有谓语动词吧

blackTshirt

这题其实我觉得很阴险：

The first commercially successful drama to depict Black family life sympathetically and the first play by a Black woman to be produced on Broadway, it was Lorraine Hansberry’s A Raisin in the Sun that won the New York Drama Critics’ Circle Award in 1959, and was later made into both a film and a musical.

1. it was Lorraine Hansberry’s A Raisin in the Sun that won the New York Drama Critics’ Circle Award in 1959, and was later made

2. in 1959 A Raisin in the Sun, by Lorraine Hansberry, won the New York Drama Critics’ Circle Award and was later made

3. Lorraine Hansberry won the New York Drama Critics’ Circle Award for A Raisin in the Sun in 1959, and it was later made

4. Lorraine Hansberry’s A Raisin in the Sun won the New York Drama Critics’ Circle Award in 1959 and was later made

5. A Raisin in the Sun, by Lorraine Hansberry, won the New York Drama Critics’ Circle Award in 1959, and later made it

独立主格在句首（太容易迷惑成是同位语结构了）。A 是个强调结构。
            It was sth that… ，导致it没有指代，it不能当后面的and was later made…的主语。

B in 1959修饰A Raisin in the Sun，于是这本书是在1959年写的，而不是在1959年得奖的。

C 前面独立主格的主语是说一个drama，后面主语变成一个人，逻辑相差太远。（独立主格自己的主语虽然和主句主语不同，但是逻辑不能相差太远。）。

E 最后的it指代书本身，逻辑错误。

（个人观点）

alvin1220

还是 不知道A为什么不对

moonwalker

觉得A的表达“, and was later made”有问题， 如果主语跟“it was Lorraine Hansberry's A Raisin in the Sun that won the New York Drama Critics' Circle Award in 1959” 一样的话，应该把逗号去掉。如果不一样的话应该把主语加回来。

wg5702zy

以下是引用blackTshirt在2009/7/3 18:05:00的发言：

这题其实我觉得很阴险：

The first commercially successful drama to depict Black family life sympathetically and the first play by a Black woman to be produced on Broadway, it was Lorraine Hansberry’s A Raisin in the Sun that won the New York Drama Critics’ Circle Award in 1959, and was later made into both a film and a musical.

1. it was Lorraine Hansberry’s A Raisin in the Sun that won the New York Drama Critics’ Circle Award in 1959, and was later made

2. in 1959 A Raisin in the Sun, by Lorraine Hansberry, won the New York Drama Critics’ Circle Award and was later made

3. Lorraine Hansberry won the New York Drama Critics’ Circle Award for A Raisin in the Sun in 1959, and it was later made

4. Lorraine Hansberry’s A Raisin in the Sun won the New York Drama Critics’ Circle Award in 1959 and was later made

5. A Raisin in the Sun, by Lorraine Hansberry, won the New York Drama Critics’ Circle Award in 1959, and later made it

独立主格在句首（太容易迷惑成是同位语结构了）。A 是个强调结构。
   It was sth that… ，导致it没有指代，it不能当后面的and was later made…的主语。

B in 1959修饰A Raisin in the Sun，于是这本书是在1959年写的，而不是在1959年得奖的。

C 前面独立主格的主语是说一个drama，后面主语变成一个人，逻辑相差太远。（独立主格自己的主语虽然和主句主语不同，但是逻辑不能相差太远。）。

E 最后的it指代书本身，逻辑错误。

（个人观点）

我不认为The first commercially successful drama to depict Black family life sympathetically and the first play by a Black woman to be produced on Broadway是独立主格。

白勇的《语法全解》上说同位语结构必须对其修饰具有解释力，可在名词前或后；独立主格在句首或者句尾，起状语作用，表伴随原因、条件、状态等。

这很明显是对主语做解释说明的，做同位语。

violetbao

It is impossible for "A Raisin in the Sun" (drama) to make it(drama)  into a film or  a musical.

kaipiggy

再问：D项Lorraine Hansberry’s A Raisin in the Sun 也会有歧义。
Lorraine Hansberry是作者的名字还是书名的一部分。。。
请NN解释。

王艺澈

哪位高人可以指点一下：
A中的it was …… that应该是强调句吧？
如果选D不会改变愿意吗？
为什么D比A更好呢？

李学子

我觉得B的错误之处有二。第一，in 1959的修饰对象问题，如前人所说。第二，by Lorraine Hansberry结构只能做状语而不能作定语修饰主语，所以它修饰了won，语法有错误。而D选项避免了这两个错误且没有其他错误。本人认为prep语法笔记上所说的“in 1959隔开了同位语drama and play和A Raisin in the Sun”的说法是错误的，因为许多正确的句子都有时间状语位于主语之前，隔开同位语的情况。