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以下是引用jonasjin在2005-3-18 23:35:00的发言：

I think the right answer is E

"E.A Raisin in the Sun, by Lorraine Hansberry, won the New York Drama Critics’ Circle Award in 1959, and later made it A Raisin in the Sun怎么能主动的去made 呢?    " IF not, how can it " won" the award for it self ???

1、by sb/sth这种用法从来都不会脱离动词而单独存在，常见的用法，sth is done by sb/sth. 动作不明确！这里可以理解为很多种意思：written by Lorraine Hansberry/ played by Lorraine Hansberry......

by sb    is very commonly used form nothing wrong with it .

2、it指代有问题或者说made得动作发出者有问题。是 A Raisin in the Sun?--从形式上来看应该如此，但逻辑上不通。

made it  it here is not point a specific thing,  I think this is an common expression. for example, we made it (when we succeed in something). even in highly standard English we still can say it.

你错了。it必须要有明确指示对象。而且made自己逻辑确实不通。

另外，你能说出D哪儿不比E强吗？是选最优答案。不是能自圆其说就可以的。

nickt

感觉D最好。

同意2楼。B的“in 1959”在这个位置有问题。

allll_potato

b的话把原来作者的意思说倒了 作者想说Lorraine Hansberry’s A Raisin in the Sun won 在GMAT中还有一条语法,可以用主动的时候一般不用被动

ethyl

B, in 1959位置不对，可能会产生歧义： in 1959，Lorraine Hansberry wrote A Raisin in the Sun, 实际是in 1959, won award.

不是这样歧异的吧

我觉得应该是：in 1959修饰了整个句子，所以会让人误解为in 1959, …was made into…；实际上是1959年以后被made的。

OG上有个例子，偶记不大清楚哪道啦，抱歉！

by sb/sth这种用法从来都不会脱离动词而单独存在，常见的用法，sth is done by sb/sth. 动作不明确！这里可以理解为很多种意思：written by Lorraine Hansberry/ played by Lorraine Hansberry......

这个听起来很有道理，虽然偶以前没有很注意的说；收下了，先。

b的话把原来作者的意思说倒了 作者想说Lorraine Hansberry’s A Raisin in the Sun won 在GMAT中还有一条语法,可以用主动的时候一般不用被动

这点牵强哦

小女公子

The first commercially successful drama to depict Black family life sympathetically and the first play by a Black woman to be produced on Broadway, it was Lorraine Hansberry’s A Raisin in the Sun that won the New York Drama Critics’ Circle Award in 1959, and was later made into both a film and a musical.

1. it was Lorraine Hansberry’s A Raisin in the Sun that won the New York Drama Critics’ Circle Award in
   1959, and was later made


2. in 1959 A Raisin in the Sun, by Lorraine Hansberry, won the New York Drama Critics’ Circle Award and was later made


3. Lorraine Hansberry won the New York Drama Critics’ Circle Award for A Raisin in the Sun in 1959, and it was later made


4. Lorraine Hansberry’s A Raisin in the Sun won the New York Drama Critics’ Circle Award in 1959 and was later made


5. A Raisin in the Sun, by Lorraine Hansberry, won the New York Drama Critics’ Circle Award in 1959, and later made it

确认一下A里面，and前的逗号是错的吧？两个动词连接没有逗号，两个句子连接必须要有逗号。right？

小女公子

The first commercially successful drama to depict Black family life sympathetically and the first play by a Black woman to be produced on Broadway, it was Lorraine Hansberry’s A Raisin in the Sun that won the New York Drama Critics’ Circle Award in 1959, and was later made into both a film and a musical.

1. it was Lorraine Hansberry’s A Raisin in the Sun that won the New York Drama Critics’ Circle Award in
   1959, and was later made


2. in 1959 A Raisin in the Sun, by Lorraine Hansberry, won the New York Drama Critics’ Circle Award and was later made


3. Lorraine Hansberry won the New York Drama Critics’ Circle Award for A Raisin in the Sun in 1959, and it was later made


4. Lorraine Hansberry’s A Raisin in the Sun won the New York Drama Critics’ Circle Award in 1959 and was later made


5. A Raisin in the Sun, by Lorraine Hansberry, won the New York Drama Critics’ Circle Award in 1959, and later made it

确认一下，A里面and前的逗号是错的吧？？？？and连接两个动作没有绝对没有逗号，连接两个句子必须逗号，right？？

小女公子

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windlake

以下是引用小女公子在2005-5-25 20:34:00的发言：

The first commercially successful drama to depict Black family life sympathetically and the first play by a Black woman to be produced on Broadway, it was Lorraine Hansberry’s A Raisin in the Sun that won the New York Drama Critics’ Circle Award in 1959, and was later made into both a film and a musical.

1. it was Lorraine Hansberry’s A Raisin in the Sun that won the New York Drama Critics’ Circle Award in
   1959, and was later made


2. in 1959 A Raisin in the Sun, by Lorraine Hansberry, won the New York Drama Critics’ Circle Award and was later made


3. Lorraine Hansberry won the New York Drama Critics’ Circle Award for A Raisin in the Sun in 1959, and it was later made


4. Lorraine Hansberry’s A Raisin in the Sun won the New York Drama Critics’ Circle Award in 1959 and was later made


5. A Raisin in the Sun, by Lorraine Hansberry, won the New York Drama Critics’ Circle Award in 1959, and later made it

确认一下，A里面and前的逗号是错的吧？？？？and连接两个动作没有绝对没有逗号，连接两个句子必须逗号，right？？

I agree with you. ","+"FANBOYS" always go with sentences.

fatlara

A:  it was...., and was...

根据并列的原则,相同的助动词应该省略的吧.

所以,A就错在and后面多了一个was

小女公子mm及windlake mm, and 连接两个动词之前不加","是一定的么..?

advantage

以下是引用uajasmine在2005-3-19 6:14:00的发言：

B atcually

没有那么确凿吧？