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62 The following appeared in a memo from the director of a large group ofhospitals.

"In a laboratory study of liquid antibacterial hand soaps, aconcentrated solution of UltraClean produced a 40 percent greater reduction inthe bacteria population than did the liquid hand soaps currently used in ourhospitals. During a subsequent test of UltraClean at our hospital in Workby,that hospital reported significantly fewer cases of patient infection than didany of the other hospitals in our group. Therefore, to prevent seriouspatient infections, we should supply UltraClean at all hand-washing stationsthroughout our hospital system."

Write a response in which you examine the stated and/or unstated assumptionsof the argument. Be sure to explain how the argument depends on theseassumptions and what the implications are for the argument if the assumptionsprove unwarranted.

竹林中人

看了下，LZ语言功底很好，详细情况请看附件

patrickgmail

看了下，LZ语言功底很好，详细情况请看附件

-- by 会员 竹林中人 (2012/9/28 0:30:09)

我的作文写得感觉不好呢，每次的argument都基本是那几个词语
谢谢你的建议我再修改。

patrickgmail

9.28
108. The following appeared in a memo from the owner of a chain of cheese stores located throughout the United States.
"For many years all the stores in our chain have stocked a wide variety of both domestic and imported cheeses. Last year, however, all of the five best-selling cheeses at our newest store were domestic cheddar cheeses from Wisconsin. Furthermore, a recent survey by Cheeses of the World magazine indicates an increasing preference for domestic cheeses among its subscribers. Since our company can reduce expenses by limiting inventory, the best way to improve profits in all of our stores is to discontinue stocking many of our varieties of imported cheese and concentrate primarily on domestic cheeses."

Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.