因为我看到官方范文上的这个种写作指引 “Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered in order to decide whether the recommendation and the argument on which it is based are reasonable. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the recommendation.” 然后官方范文是： The advertising director of the Super Screen Movie production company believes that increasing the amount of advertising the company does will in crease the amount of people attending Super Screen produced movies. He believes this because during the past year fewer people than ever before attended Super Screen produced movies, yet the percentage of positive reviews about specific Super Screen produced movies increased over the past year. Ostensibly the extra advertising would tout the good reviews writ ten about Super Screen movies. Before this plan is implemented, however, Super Screen needs to ad dress some questions about its possible l aws. First of all, the company needs to ask what the actual number of people attending its movies as compared to the movies of other production companies is. The number of people going to movies may have been in universal decline. If this is the case and more people are going to see Super Screen Movies than the movies of any other production company, advertising about how fun it is to go to the movie theater may do more to boost Super Screen viewership than advertising promoting its own good reviews. Secondly, the company needs to ask what the actual original number of positive reviews was. If Super Screen movies recieved 1% positive reviews last year and this year they recieved 2% positive reviews, getting that message to viewers is not going to increase Super Screen attendence. Making better movies would be much more likely to increase attendence rates. Finally, Super Screen needs to ask what the relationship is between its viewers and the movie reviewers cited in the memo. Using a survey distributed to its target audience, Super Screen could determine if movie reviews have an effect on their audience’s decision to go see a movie, whether movie reviewers tended to have the same taste as the target audience and exactly whether or not movie reviews are reaching the audience. Super Screen also needs to consider how its movie choices have affected the separate movie reviewer and audience populations. If the studio has switched from making mega blockbuster action movies to more nuanced dramas, the general public may be less willing to go see their movies even though movie critics prefer the dramas to the action movies. Finally the studio must ask whether the percentage of positive reviews is really a relevant way to measure the potential impact of movie reviews. There are dozens of movie reviewers but when deciding whether to not to go to a movie, the general public will usually pick from among the 10 most popular movie reviews. These are the reviews that will impress the public if they are included in advertising. If the most popular movie reviewers disliked Super Screen movies that a larger number of small time film bloggers reviewed positively, Super Screen needs to think of a new advertising strategy.
谢谢你的答复。我想确认一下，针对那些要求提出question的instruction，是否要按照官方范文的例子那样写呢， 即firstly, we need to ask that....还是可以直接点出逻辑错误，而不用提问题这种形式呢？感觉每段都采用need to ask that这种形式会不会不好呢？
谢谢你的答复。我想确认一下，针对那些要求提出question的instruction，是否要按照官方范文的例子那样写呢， 即firstly, we need to ask that....还是可以直接点出逻辑错误，而不用提问题这种形式呢？感觉每段都采用need to ask that这种形式会不会不好呢？
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