prep08 235. (GWD-9-Q1) 关于including 这道题可以这样改吗？

pandah0522

235.(GWD-9-Q1)A mixture of poems and short fiction, Jean Toomer's Cane has been called one of the three best novels ever written by Black Americans—the others being Richard Wright, author of Native Son, and Ralph Ellison, author of Invisible Man

A.Black Americans—the others being Richard Wright, author of Native Son, and Ralph Ellison, author of Invisible Man

B.Black Americans—including Native Son by Richard Wright and Invisible Man by Ralph Ellison

C.a Black American—including Richard Wright, author of Native Son, and Ralph Ellison, author of Invisible Man

D.a Black American—the others being Richard Wright, author of Native Son, and Ralph Ellison, author of Invisible Man(E)

E.a Black American—the others being Richard Wright's Native Son and Ralph Ellison's Invisible Man


可不可以将 C和E合体？然后就变成F. A mixture of poems and short fiction, Jean Toomer's Cane has been called one of the three best novels ever written by a Black American—including Richard Wright's Native Son and Ralph Ellison's Invisible Man
这样是不是也可以成为正确答案？因为including作为介词修饰three best novels，而且也解决了破折号的平行问题？






F. A mixture of poems and short fiction, Jean Toomer's Cane has been called one of the three best novels ever written by a Black American—including Richard Wright's Native Son and Ralph Ellison's Invisible Man
这样是不是也可以成为正确答案？因为including作为介词修饰three best novels，而且也解决了破折号的平行问题？

DUKB24

不行。including是partial example
类似。i like fruit,including apple,pear.

这里incuding是对的。因为后两者是前者的一部分

而这里要求的是exhaustive example。
one               the others    

并不存在  partial example

滴答哈哈

DUKB24 发表于 2012-9-4 15:31
不行。including是partial example类似。i like fruit,including apple,pear.这里incuding是对的。因为后两 ...

说得好清楚，赞！