9.3 Do you agree that it is better to spend money on traveling and vocation tha

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9.3: Do you agree that it is better to spend money on traveling and vocation than save money for the future.



文章的思路：Agree. Spend money on traveling and vocation.

A+1: Fun. ( enrich our lives; make new friends; learn from the journey).

A+2: relax, release, refresh, get away from troublesome and pressure.

A-1： Cost money, but we can find some economical ways. At the same time we can save little money for the future.



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Have you ever been to the Greet Wall in the capital of China, Beijing? Have you ever walked along the West Lake in Hangzhou City and felt the breeze? Have you ever seen the extraordinary scenery of Da Li? If you have never had such experiences, you would never know how much fun traveling and vocation could bring you. (3句排比，来表明自己的观点。Spend money on traveling and vocation.)



Firstly, it is traveling and vocation that can bring us a lot of fun. (尝试用了一下强调句，想强调的是traveling and vocation) Although it will cost us some money, we gain a lot of happiness and interesting experiences on the vocation. On the summer vocation of my freshmen year, I traveled to Beidai He, the most beautiful scenery I have ever seen. It was the first time I saw the beautiful sea which is clear, blue and endless. I felt myself so small when walked along the beach. At the night, my friends and I played games, talked jokes, ate seafood at the beach. It was really fun and I will never forget these memories. Traveling gives us an opportunity to meet friends and enhance our friendship as the same time as we have fun.(引用了一下自己的经历)



Secondly, we can relax, and refresh ourselves by traveling. In modern society, we are always in a situation which has a strong pressure. We should find an effective way to relax, had let our body and mind have a rest. We can easily get away from the troublesome and bad feelings, because we are not at home and being a new place where few people know us. Breathing the cold and fresh air also can help us become calm. After a short time break, we can transfer our stress to energy, which means we can work or study more effectively when we get back to companies or schools.



Last but not least, there are still some disadvantages of spending money on traveling and vocations. For instance, we could get hurt or have incidents during the journey. According to the newspaper named China Daily, 13 percent of the travelers get hurt during traveling. （引用了一下数据）However, we can be more careful to prevent ourselves from getting injuries. In addition, spending money on traveling and vocations doesn’t mean spend all the money on them.



From what has been discussed above, I could safely draw the conclusion that spending money on traveling and vocations is better.