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是否支持针对孩子（2-5岁）的广告
I think that the television advertising towards young children should be banned because they damage children’s mind and their body, and also they make their parents headache.
It's obvious that the more advertisement time the more time you spend your time on watching television, because once you are watching a TV program you will not walk away the TV for you don't want to lose even a subtle plot of the program. This phenomenon occurs among the children particularly, since they don't have the ability to constrain themselves. If the children concentrate on the TV for a long time, it will damage their (eyesight) considerablely. More and more children get the (nearsightedness) when they are still young, we should take some action to prevent them from such unhealthy life style. One of these solutions is to decrease the time they spent on watching TV. But (However) after all we can't constrain their time to watch cartoon or other program which is designed for and beneficial to such kids, what we only can do is fight against these boring and time-(consuming) advertisement. Let's have a fundamentally mathematical calculation. If those merchant insert a five-minute advertisement into a twenty-minute cartoons program, how much time it will compel our kids to watching TY. It's an significant number. It doubtlessly damage children's health.
Furthermore, it will do harm to kid's mind. Every human will want to compete with others, even though he is just a little kid. It's human nature. But if kids see too many advertisements, they will ask their parent to buy these expensive products for them, no matter whether these things are useful. You must confess the merchant have the ability to capture the people's appetite especially the children's and they will entice the children to buy their product. Once a kid buys a cool toy car, the other kids will ask their parents buy the cars for them immediately. What's worse? What if the kid's parent can't afford to obtain all these expensive car? Such kids will lose their confidence and their statue among his friends. Maybe their self-esteem will be destroyed. On the other hand, those kids who can have more and more new toys will get vanity. They will look down upon those children who don't have the same toy. It’s so outrageous even though in the adult's world. What we should do is to create a healthy comfortable environment for our kids, let them grow up happily.
Finally, even though I don't think it is as important as the kid's matter, I have to mention it. This is about the adult. There are too many toys, my friend Li always complained. As parent, he didn't want to let his kids down but he had to spend too much money on such toys although his budget was so tight. Also, it's prevalent that too many parents spend on toys more than education fees. They are pursuing the shallow but forgetting the substance. But they have no choice, their children urged them to work harder and harder, they are so tired.
Above all statement, I strongly don't agree with television advertising to kids.
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