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E月羽

Whether university professors should focus on the education of students or researches? It might be tempting to back professors invest more time and energy in educating instead of researching. However, given to chance , I think the formula ought to be reversed. Granted ,the student play an crucial role in future development. Still, researches in various sphere form the bases for a social rapid development.
First of all, Researches are of great important for our life. Countless scientific achievement , which has always accompanied the progress and revolution of the society , definitely , relevant to a multitude of experimental researches conducting by professors and researcher. the invent of the stream engine brought a new era of prosperity of world society; the employment of electricity has multiplied the productivity and virtually reproduced limited resources on the earth. By the same token, the innovation of computer technology has made the Earth a little village and connected distant countries as a single Market. Apparently, we cannot emphasis the important of researcher to much.
  Furthermore, the nature of occupation of the professor determines their work propensity. We could not confuse the definition of professor with teacher. university professor could prefer utility sophisticated and profound formula that student cannot understand and obtained in the college rather than the general but redundancy academic knowledge  dealing problem. Consequently It is inevitable that professor alienated themselves from the student due to the gap of knowledge.
 Given the understanding , it is difficult to overrate the connection between research and education. Admittedly , it can not be ignore that schooling of student imparted by professor is one of the vital feature of social development . Nevertheless, in many cases, the accomplishments hail from scores of research conducted by professor could facilitate the schooling of university . for example, technology has offered students with easy access to academic databases via Ipad screen. Read classical literature masterpieces or watch historical documents on internet. These great works are essentially helpful to arousing their curiosity and prepares them with key knowledge necessary for many courses. This kind of case is not rare. Thus ,we can draw a conclusion that Researches greatly benefit the education in college.
To sum up, the professor’s time should be occupied with a plenty of research . for these reason mentioned above , it is incorrect to place education significant above that of researches.

beiyezi

1,很多句子开头没大写
2，复数没加S
3，高亮是建议
4，语言方面挺好，        逻辑上：论证的，第三段没说清楚






Whether university professors should focus on the education of students or researches? It might be tempting to back professors invest more time and energy in educating instead of researching. However, given to chance, I think the formula ought to be reversed. Granted, the students play a crucial role in future development of a nation. Still, researches in various spheres form the bases for a social rapid development.
First of all, Researches are of great important for our life. Countless scientific achievement, which has always accompanied with the progress and revolution of the society, definitely, relevant to a multitude of experimental researches conducting by professors and researchers. The invention of the stream engine brought a new era of prosperity of world society（booming society）; the employment of electricity has multiplied the productivity and virtually reproduced limited resources on the earth. By the same token, the innovation of computer technology has made the Earth a little village and connected distant countries as a single Market. Apparently, we cannot emphasis the important of researcher too much.
 Furthermore, the nature（characteristic） of occupation of the professor determines their work propensity. We could not confuse the definition of professor with teacher. University professors could prefer utility of sophisticated and profound formula that students cannot understand and obtained in the college rather than the general but redundancy academic knowledge dealing problem. Consequently It is inevitable that professor alienated themselves from the student due to the gap of knowledge. （这段话的重点是不是研究才是教授的天职然后加以解释？ 没表达清楚，怎么扯到教授和学生之间的水平差距上了，好像意思是，因为学生太笨了，所以教授应该放弃学生而直奔研究？）
Given the understanding , it is difficult to overrate（overrate是高估的意思吧，很难去高估研究和教育的关系？） the connection between research and education. Admittedly, it can not be ignore that schooling of students imparted by professor is one of the vital feature of social development. Nevertheless, in many cases, the accomplishments hail from scores of research conducted by professors could facilitate the schooling of university（nevertheless 表转折，可是这句和上句没转折关系）. For example, technology has offered students with easy access to academic databases via I pad screen. Read classical literature masterpieces or watch historical documents on internet. These great works are essentially helpful to arousing their curiosity and prepares them with key knowledge necessary for many courses. This kind of case is not rare. Thus, we can draw a conclusion that researches greatly benefit the education in college.

To sum up, the professor’s time should be occupied with（by） a plenty of research. For these reasons mentioned above, it is incorrect to place education significant above that of researches（incorrect for professors to chose education over researches）.

E月羽

独立
The most important investment of a company is to improve the skills of its employees.D\A
Investment activities are of extraordinary important for the running of cooperation. Planners should make such decisions on a case-by-case analysis. Granted , in some cases, improving employees’ skills is an effective channel of investment , it is undeniable that other factors also play pivotal role in direction of capital costing.
  To maximize the profit of company , millions of money should be paid to attract brilliant leader. According with observation and common sense, it is clear that policy decisions of key executives that determine whether a firm ultimately succeeds. Notable cases include the turnaround success of Coca-cola after Roberto Goizueta assumed the position of CEO , and ,in contrast , the apple computer debacle following the departure of its founding visionary Steve Jobs. we cannot emphasize the important of leader too much. In general , a preeminent leader is born to lead, who has astute sense of successful opportunity. The talent of lead cannot be proved by Acquired training. Thus we should invest money every year to recruit qualified manager.
    Besides the cost of location, we also need to pay every year developing advanced technologies. We live in a world teemed with fierce competition and everyday there are obsolete product replaced by new ones with advanced technology. Without the enormous money investing into technological development and innovation, enterprises cannot to survive in the upcoming competition. Such as the bankruptcy of Kodak corporation due to miss the historical opportunity of digital . therefore ,  it is difficult to overrate the important of relationship between the investment of innovation and development of company.
    so significant the location of business film is also that we should cast scores of capital to purchase the most suitable one. if a enterprise is a tree, the position is soil. The conditions offered by the positions , such as customer’s group, market sphere and so forth ,are kin to the nutrition from the soil. Different trees rely on the variation of nutrition which determines the development of the company. For instance, contrary to many of Brand stores generally locating in densely populated regions and downtown areas, Walmart , warehouse supermarket has expanded its franchise store businesses in sparsely populated regions. This sort of cases are not rare .  we can draw a conclusion that the expenditure of location is not negligible in comparison with of improving works’ capacity.

 Admittedly , the raising of capacity of workers would benefit the company so much , such a developing cooperative interaction with colleague .  still , we should not ignore other factors which are belonging the most important investment scope.

E月羽

9月8日综合
According to the reading passage, the behaviors of dealing among private collectors have extremely negative effects on scientist as well as the public. However, the professor argues that this consequence was being exaggerated and she use three piece of reason to buttress her opinion.
 First , on contrary to the statement in the passage that the citizen have few opportunities and less interest to view the fossil collections due to privatization of them. the speaker figure out that the result is reversed. With the fossils become a sort of commodity which could be purchase, Some of scientific institution and museum are able to buy and exhibit collection.
 Furthermore, the professor states that even if the millionaire hold the ownership of fossils, it is not necessarily means that scientists have no approach to examine and research the collections, which differs from the article. She puts forward that so precious and valued is the fossils are that the owners will identify them. Samples of fossils be about to pass the hand of researcher at first. In this way, the scientist could gain access to any information of them.
 In addition, the narrator points out that granted, a plenty of valuable fossils might be destroyed by commercial collectors, still, it is better than being buried beneath ground. A multitude of fossils are undiscovered for the sake of lack of collecting programs in many universities. This point undermines the claim made in the reading.
 In short, the professor precisely finds the flaws in the reading passage, and compelling proves that the advantages of fossil’s commercial far overweight the disadvantages.

fuzhengrui

fuzhengrui

According to the reading passage, the behaviors of dealing（deals) among private collectors have extremely negative effects on scientist(scientific researches) as well as the public. However, the professor argues that this consequence was being exaggerated and she use(s) three piece(s) of reason to buttress her opinion.
First , on contrary to the statement in the passage that the citizen(s) have few(er) opportunities and less interest to view the fossil collections due to privatization of them.(,) the speaker figure(s) out that the result is reversed. With(with后面不能直接加句子） the fossils become a sort of commodity which could be purchase(d) , Some(some) of scientific institution(s) and museum(s) are able to buy and exhibit (the) collection(s).
Furthermore, the professor states that even if the millionaire(s) hold the ownership of fossils, it is not necessarily means(it does not necessarily mean) that scientists have no approach to examine and research the collections, which differs from the article. She puts forward that so precious and valued is the fossils are that the owners will identify them(倒装没写对）. Samples of fossils be(语法有问题） about to pass the hand of researcher(s) at first. In this way, the scientist could gain access to any information of them.
In addition, the narrator(全文都用一个professor就够了把） points out that granted, a plenty of valuable fossils might be destroyed（damaged更好） by commercial collectors, still, it is better than being buried beneath ground. A multitude of fossils are undiscovered for the sake of lack of collecting programs in many universities. This point undermines the claim made in the reading.
In short, the professor precisely finds the flaws in the reading passage, and compelling proves that the advantages of fossil’s commercial far overweight(outweigh) the disadvantages.

你表达的意思是听力的意思，但是小错不断。

E月羽

19月9号综合

The lecturer rejects the ideas presented in the reading passage that salvage logging is an effective method to protect the health of forest and ecosystem. She use three pieces of reasons to buttress herself viewpoint that this means would lead long-term ecosystem damage.

The professor does not agree with the first point made in the reading------that salvage logging could provide desirable condition for the vegetation recovering. She puts forward that the consequence is reversed. The process of decomposition richen the soil of forest, which will benefit the tree growth. Removing dead trees lead the lack of nutrition to soil.

The author figures out that to minimize the damages of the insect infestation, the totting wood should be razed. In contrast, the speaker points out that even it is the fact that the decaying woods offer suitable habitat for bug , it is not necessary means that the phenomenon will cause bad result. The spruce bark beetles have develop lasting 100 years without any enormous disaster happening. Meanwhile , the rotting trees is a desirable home not only for spruce bark beetle but also for birds and other species of pest.

In addition, the narrator admits that savage logging is beneficial. But she also claims that the effect is temporary and small. To be specific, it is expensive to transport logs by helicopter and other transportation. Besides, Too often, the logging industries are more willing to employ the outsider works with more experience and well-trained. This undermines what the writer believes.

To sum up , the professor precisely finds the flaws in the reading passage, and compelling proves that the disadvantage of logging far overweight advantage.

haduni

The lecturer rejects the ideas presented in thereading passage that salvage logging is an effective method to protect thehealth of forest and ecosystem. She use uses three pieces of reasons to buttress herself her own viewpoint that this means would lead to long-term ecosystemdamage.

The professor does not agree with the firstpoint made in the reading------that salvage logging could provide desirablecondition for the vegetation recovering. She puts forward that the consequenceis reversed just opposite. The process of decomposition richen enrich the soil of forest, which will benefit the tree growth.Removing dead trees lead tothe lack of nutrition to soil.

The author figures out that to minimize thedamages of the insect infestation, the totting wood should be razed. Incontrast, the speaker points out that even it is the fact that the decayingwoods offer suitable habitat for bugs , it is not necessary means that the phenomenon will cause badresult. The spruce bark beetles have develop lasting 100 years without any enormous disaster happening. Meanwhile, the rottingtrees is are the desirable home not only for spruce bark beetles but also for birds andother species of pest(insects害虫和昆虫是不一样的).

In addition, the narrator admits that savage salvagelogging is beneficial. But she also claims that the effect is temporary andsmall. To be specific, it is expensive to transport logs by helicopter andother transportation means of transportation. Besides, Too toooften, the logging industries are more willing to employ the outsider workswith more experience and beingwell-trained. This undermines what the writer believes.

To sum up , the professor precisely finds theflaws in the reading passage, and compelling proves that the disadvantage oflogging far overweight advantage.

很不错呀，都是些无关紧要的小错误

E月羽

9月10日独立
Have you ever been alienated by your colleagues ?  Have you ever been job-hopping since you cannot tolerate the bad temper of your boss? Have you ever been blamed since you cannot cooperate with co-workers? If you have never experienced such things, you might hold the wrong opinion that only having excellent knowledge for job can we gain the ultimate triumph in fierce job competition. In fact, I have witnessed the struggle and paradox of the youngster when they first enter job environment.
First and foremost, the adaptation of new environment easily strengthens the connection between us and co-workers. The earlier we can adjust to the environment, the more possible we can blend into the social circle of company, which could benefit employees greatly. We cannot emphasize the important of team work too much. As a general employee, quickly integrating into work group enables us to accomplish our task more effectively and efficiently. Tons of time, wasting on tackling interior contradiction, will be saved. As a leader assigned recently, team group provides us a platform to deeply learn the capacities of workers. It is hard for me to image that a leader who has been kept away from teams can accurately distribute tasks to each of employees. According to a survey conducted by national statistic Bureau of China in 2012, people who can quickly adapt to the environment are able to finish 20 percent more works with one week than the unadjusted ones. That could be explain the phenomenon why the increasing number of people pay attention on job adaptation rather than excellent work skills.
Further more, adapting to the circumstances offers people with more opportunities to succeed. Compared employees to seeds and company to soil, if one of seed is unable to adapt to the soil, it will be overcome by other seed and eventually wiped out. However, if it can adjust to the condition of soil greatly, it will beat others obtain more nutrition and advantage, such as operation experience from co-workers, the opportunities of advancement and so forth, and become a huge tree someday. For instance, my uncle hired by The General Motors with another three candidates two years ago. He is the only one person who did not have certificate of high accountant among all of people, but he more swift adapt to the job than any others. He is the first one operating adeptly the company software to finish report form. He is the first one blending into work group and he is also the first one got appreciation of all people in company. Eventually, his is also the only one who was promoted within one year. This case are not rare and we can draw a conclusion that it is easier to gain access to success with well adaptation instead of job skill.
 Admittedly, preeminent job skills have themselves advantages. Job capacity is a stepping-stone to success; they provide us more possibility to be recruited by operation. However, in the sight of long-term, without well adjusting capacity equaling with job knowledge, we cannot survive in the competition of company, let alone thriving. After all, the knowledge of job could be acquired gradually from a multitude of job experiences.

bonfin

9月10日独立
Have you ever been alienated by your colleagues ? Have you ever been job-hopping since you cannot tolerate the bad temper of your boss? Have you ever been blamed since you cannot cooperate with co-workers? If you have never experienced such things, you might hold the wrong opinion that only having excellent knowledge for job can we gain the ultimate triumph in fierce job competition. In fact, I have witnessed the struggle and paradox of the youngster when they first enter job environment.

First and foremost, the adaptation of new environment easily strengthens the connection between us and co-workers. The earlier we can adjust to the environment, the more possible we can blend into the social circle of company, which could benefit employees greatly. We cannot emphasize the important（importance） of team work too much. As a general employee, quickly integrating into work group enables us to accomplish our task more effectively and efficiently. Tons of time, wasting on tackling interior contradiction, will be saved. As a leader assigned recently, team group provides us a platform to deeply learn the capacities of workers. It is hard for me to image that a leader who has been kept away from teams can accurately distribute tasks to each of employees. According to a survey conducted by national statistic Bureau of China in 2012, people who can quickly adapt to the environment are able to finish 20 percent more works with one week than the unadjusted ones. That could be explain（be去掉） the phenomenon why the increasing number of people pay attention on job adaptation rather than excellent work skills.

Further more, adapting to the circumstances offers people with more opportunities to succeed. Compared employees to seeds and company to soil, if one of seed is unable to adapt to the soil, it will be overcome by other seed and eventually wiped out. However, if it can adjust to the condition of soil greatly, it will beat others obtain more nutrition and advantage, such as operation experience from co-workers, the opportunities of advancement and so forth, and become a huge tree someday. For instance, my uncle hired by The General Motors with another three candidates two years ago. He is the only one person who did not have certificate of high accountant among all of people, but he more swift adapt to the job than any others. He is the first one operating adeptly the company software to finish report form. He is the first one blending into work group and he is also the first one got appreciation of all people in company. Eventually, his is also the only one who was promoted within one year. This case are not rare and we can draw a conclusion that it is easier to gain access to success with well adaptation instead of job skill.

Admittedly, preeminent job skills have themselves advantages. Job capacity is a stepping-stone to success; they（it） provide us more possibility (possibilities)to be recruited by operation. However, in the sight of long-term, without well adjusting capacity equaling with job knowledge, we cannot survive in the competition of company, let alone thriving. After all, the knowledge of job could be acquired gradually from a multitude of job experiences.

写得太好啦！！！用词很丰富，逻辑也很清晰，句子形式也多变。膜拜ing~~~
不过，个人觉得最好加上结尾段哈~~