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Question : Do you agree that communication skill is the most important character for celcbrities





With the increasing admiring for celebrities,more and more people have intresting in what’s the most important character of celebrities.Is the communication skill the most important one? A controversial topic as it is,we see quite different aspects when conditions change.Depending on personal experience ,personality type and emotion concern,different people may hold different opinion.As far as I am concerned ,at a large degree I’m on the opposite side of this claim.because the assertion is contaminated with servel difects,which degrades this argument as problematic.I will illustrate my view points in the followling paragraph.



The main reason for my propensity is that different celebrities admire different characters. To a large extend, which character worths more depends what the celebrity is famous for.For example, To a bussiness person,reputation may be the most important character. To a doctor the operating skills may worths more. To a coleague professor, the academic skill may be the most precious charater. The Chinese most famous general Chenyi ,for example,even has difficult communicating with others ,but he ,with his soldiers won, many battles,what made him a hero for generations.So the claim commits a fallacy of oversimplification.

To carry the further, to be a celebrity is known as a compilicated task whose approach involves a combination of both external and internal layers and can not accomplish only by hightling the communication skills.It is difficult for us to compare which character values more.For instance,the world-famous celebrity Jobs has two may characters that contribute most to his fame. he had a good skill of communication,of couse, since he is a excelent leader,at the same time, we can’t deny that he is also a men with lots of creativity.It’s the combination of these two main characters that leads to his success,but we can not dicide which worths more.

In addtion,there evidence which directly point out that,in China ,the most important character is not communication skill.A polling conducted by China Daily,after allowing about the 10000 Chinese celebrites from different careers ,suggests that the three most important characters for them are loyal , patience,andreputation,which has nothing to do with commucition skills.So is rational for us to cast doubts on worldwide utility of the argument.

Admittedly commucition skills is vital in our daily life and there are many celebrities who owna execellent communition skill,but it’s goundless to say that this character is essential.there are also many examples that a person can become famous without communition skill. Taking into account of all these factors,we may reach the conclusion that it no point to claim that communication skill the most important character for celcbrities.

Dragon332

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If you need to discuss upsetting or controversial problem with others, you will use e-mail or text messaging or use the telephone or voice-messaging

In our daily life ,we may often face some upsetting or controversial problems which we need to disscus with others.Will you use gmail to connect your friends to interpret the occasion by using words or will you give your friends a phone call to decribe the problem. A controversial topic as it is.we see quite different aspects when condition changes, Depending on personal experience,peisonality type and emotional concern,different people may hold differend opinions on it.As far as I am concerned ,at a large degreee, I nod in agreement with the latter choice.I will illustrate my point of views in the following paragraghs.
The most reason for my propensity for the latter option is that through telophone or voice-messaging we can communicate more convenient and save a lot of time.Take E-mail and phone for a comparision.If my friend isn’t in front of computer,I can’t connect it through E-mail,even if he or she responses me ,I can only read the email if I am accessed to computer.whar’s more when I do other things,I also conceive my friend’s possible response.In this case,I will feel agitated and comfined.But , as for phone,it's so conveninet,because we all carry cellphone at our hands.My friend will reponse me immediately once he or she has time,and we can solve the new problem at the fist time.
In addition voice-messaging can convey our emotion. If I told my opinion to my friends happlily,it will also make my friends feel pleasant.I can use my own experience to back up my opinion.Last semester I fail in the chemistry exam,I felt very dispointed and sad.I called one of my best friends Jone to disuss about questions which I did wrong in the exam.His homorous words and best wishes made me forget the failure,and I also gained a lot of courage.but if he do this by sending an E-mail ,I believe,it would’t leave me so much impression.
The last but not least, by voice we can express ourselves more clearlily.It is not rare ,in reality, frequently many people feel that they can speak about a thing very clearly but when they are forced to write it down,it’s so difficult .
All in all,taking into account of all these factors ,we may reach the conclusion that using telephone or voice-messaging is a better choice.

Dragon332

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