请教XDF-2-11,16

joywzy

11. Charlotte Parkins Gilman, a late nineteenth-century feminist, called for urban apartment houses  including child-care facilities and clustered suburban houses including communal eating and social facilities.

(A) including child-care facilities and clustered suburban houses including communal eating and social facilities

(B) that included child-care facilities, and for clustered suburban houses to include communal eating and social facilities

(C) with child-care facilities included and for clustered suburban houses to include communal eating and social facilities

(D) that included child-care facilities and for clustered suburban houses with communal eating and social facilities

(E) to include child-care facilities and for clustered suburban houses with communal eating and social facilities included

答案,排除了A,其它四个选项中为什么D好?

16. The modernization program for the steel mill will cost approximately 51 million dollars, which it is hoped can be completed in the late 1980’s.

(A) The modernization program for the steel mill will cost approximately 51 million dollars, which it is hoped can be completed in the late 1980’s.

(B) The modernization program for the steel mill, hopefully completed in the late 1980’s, will cost approximately 51 million dollars.

(C) Modernizing the steel mill, hopefully to be completed in the late 1980’s, will cost approximately 51 million dollars.

(D) The program for modernizing the steel mill, which can, it is hoped, be completed in the late 1980’s and cost approximately 51 million dollars.

(E) Modernizing the steel mill, a program that can, it is hoped, be completed in the late 1980’s, will cost approximately 51 million dollars.

答案:E,我选C,E为何比C好?

谢谢.

braveMBA

11、JOY，这题好象讨论过N遍了，主要是并列对象混淆的问题，AND前后的内容容易产生并列歧义

16、C中有两个地方有问题。一是作为插入语 it is hoped要比hopefully优先，LZM的说法，姑且认为对吧。另外，C中的Modernizing the steel mill, hopefully to be completed in the late 1980’s，TO就近修饰的是steel mill，改变了意思，而E中Modernizing the steel mill, a program that can, it is hoped, be completed in the late 1980’s, 的 a program补出了修饰对象，意思清楚。

joywzy

以下是引用braveMBA在2003-7-1 13:03:00的发言：

16、C中有两个地方有问题。一是作为插入语 it is hoped要比hopefully优先，LZM的说法，姑且认为对吧。另外，C中的Modernizing the steel mill, hopefully to be completed in the late 1980’s，TO就近修饰的是steel mill，改变了意思，而E中Modernizing the steel mill, a program that can, it is hoped, be completed in the late 1980’s, 的 a program补出了修饰对象，意思清楚。

BraveMBA, thank u for your clear explanation. It does make sense.

joywzy

以下是引用braveMBA在2003-7-1 13:03:00的发言：
11、JOY，这题好象讨论过N遍了，主要是并列对象混淆的问题，AND前后的内容容易产生并列歧义

Could you please explain in detail? I cannot catch what you mean.

braveMBA

11、可能最简单的方法是，to include无法找到其动作执行者，逻辑关系有些模糊。而D避免了这一点。

tocean0222

to joy

including 和to include 最大区别在于子集和并列的问题，记不太清楚了；
我建议去找一下曾经讨论过这道题的贴子，记得有个mm分析的很详细，相信你会搞清楚的！

joywzy

以下是引用tocean0222在2003-7-2 1:01:00的发言：
to joy

including 和to include 最大区别在于子集和并列的问题，记不太清楚了；
我建议去找一下曾经讨论过这道题的贴子，记得有个mm分析的很详细，相信你会搞清楚的！

tocean0222, i am sorry that i cannot find the post even after my search .

epson

joy:

16. the meaning of hopefully is not equal to that of sentence it is hoped. This is the main point.

Good luck.

joywzy

what is the difference?

epson

有希望和希望
有希望是指：正在干某事或经过详细平谷后，觉得能在什么时间完成一件事情
希望：是个人的意愿。

一个是主观一个是建立在客观上面的。