第一篇托福作文 求指导！！求狠拍！！！是不是跑题了？？

mikezidane

提纲
1在家乡熟悉 舒适
2但抛弃舒适的环境才能不断进取 在别的城市更能奋斗
3生活在别处




A considerable number of college students attend university far away from home, as to seniors, many choose to hunt for jobs within the same city of their alma mater while other graduates return home for a comfortable and decent vocation. I admit that living in hometown enjoys a rather fair privilege of acquaintance however, personally I prefer those cities known for its opportunities rather than its distance from home.


Living in the city which maintains your own family members and close friends from kindergarten to college truly can be celebrated as a fortune. For the kinship and social circles which accompany you for decades can survive from being deteriorated by moving to another remote city. Human beings are far from lonely animals like tigers in the jungles, this acknowledgement clearly reflected in the novel of Robinson Crusoe. Sociologically, the constitution of social structure extends from family, school to company and country perfectly function to dispel the fear towards loneliness. Further, apart from the material possession like real estate, people rely more on spiritual property, psychologically, the comfort zone for instance, including familiar people, location or even old life styles. These undeniable advantages act as motivations for people to stay in hometown.


Serenity as the hometowns might seems, jumping out of the comfortable zone indicates the rise of an ambitious individual. Those who give up the arresting conditions at home must be driven by their intrepid and determined souls. Most well known figures in the history suffered a tough period elsewhere. Beethoven, the giant musician born in Germany, spent most of his life in Vienna, Austria. It is in this city where Beethoven met with other brilliant composers in that era and inspired each other with interminable novelty of music endeavor. If Beethoven was limited in his hometown, a German village, how can he be so productive with a tragedy life of deaf ears and almost blind eyes?


For illuminati cultures of variation from a totally different place gives rise to the possibility of being stars, while for ordinary people the idea of “live elsewhere”(from the work of Milan Kundera) is a delicate delineation of a turmoil heart thirsty for curiosity. Since the 1990s millions of Chinese have flooded to foreign countries for a brand new life. Africa, Oceania, Europe and America, every big city has its own Chinatown. Meanwhile, Chinese students who chose to study abroad reach the number of a million this year. These strangers might be quite well off in China, but willing to do plates swilling jobs in American restaurants. As for the reason, curiosity for an exotic environment plays a significant role in making such seems uneconomical decisions. For example, American dreams rooted in their heart bear the nostalgic for hometown Atlantic Ocean let alone  


People are guaranteed the freedom of migration in almost every country on earth, especially for those graduates who are young and prepared for decades to demonstrate their power. Thus it seems rather precipitous for anyone to superficially pose bias on staying in hometowns for a tranquil life, as for me an adequate and promising career opportunity outweigh anything else including the convenience for family reunion.