求牛人解答! OG13-132 最不知所措的SC

babybearmm

D的although没有了，不仅仅是逻辑错误，语法上就错，成了Run-on. 所以说ungrammatical.


"It has something bad, it has something good. " 这是个run-on sentence.
"Although it has something bad, it has something good. " 这样才对，dependent clause + independent clause.

请问各位NN，在og对D的解释里说这个句子ungrammatical就是指改变了句子的逻辑语义的意思吗？没有其他错误吗？

-- by 会员 memory210882 (2012/7/11 8:52:01)

joshuacjy

做完了OG13的语法部分...其中大部分的题目很原来都没有什么变化..唯独这一题实在是令人十分纠结.. 也没看懂OG的答案的意思..求各位牛牛解答.
这题目有另一哥们之前发过但没有高手解答.重发一次求助啊!!!!


OG13-132：
Although appearing less appetizing than most of their round and red supermarket cousins, heirloom tomatoes, grown from seeds saved during the previous year – they are often green and striped, or have plenty of bumps and bruises-heirlooms are more flavorful and thus in increasing demand.

A Although appearing less appetizing than most of their round and red supermarket cousins, heirloom tomatoes, grown from seeds saved during the previous year
B Although heirloom tomatoes, grown from seeds saved during the previous year, appear less appetizing than most of their round and red supermarket cousins
C Although they appear less appetizing than most of their round and red supermarket cousins, heirloom tomatoes, grown from seeds saved during the previous year
D Grown from seeds saved during the previous year, heirloom tomatoes appear less appetizing than most of their round and red supermarket cousins
E Heirloom tomatoes, grown from seeds saved during the previous year, although they appear less appetizing than most of their round and red supermarket cousins

有牛人可以帮忙每个选项解释一下吗..太揪心了...TT

-- by 会员 joshuacjy (2012/7/8 20:10:26)

这题每个选项挨个看肯定费时间，所以我觉得简单方法就是先提主干找split. 提主干的时候，两个破折号中间的部分纯粹属于插入语，去掉不管。主干就是：


_______________________, heirlooms are more flavorful and thus in increasing demand.


后半句是个完整的independent clause. 所以前面空格处该是
类似这样的：Although SVO   (as a dependent clause)
或者是这样的：Although adj   （比如"although appearing less appetizing")


然后扫视每个选项，分别提取空格处的主干，跟以上模板对照：
A. heirloom tomatoes
B. Although heirloom tomatoes appear
C. Although they appear, heirloom tomatoes
D. Heirloom tomatoes appear
E. Heirloom tomatoes, although they appear


只有B符合语法要求（也就是上面的模板 Although SVO）。搞定！


如果还不放心的话，把破折号加进去，这下考察B的修饰语。有个原则，就是诸如modifier placement中讨论的，这部分描述什么，就要离什么更靠近些。发现破折号中间这部分，尽管什么bumps and bruises我不懂什么意思，但是green and striped我懂，正好和round and red形成鲜明对比啊！所以说破折号中间的内容需要靠近round and red才能体现出这个“鲜明对比”的意思。联想起Ron说的，dash的一种用法就是表示surprising, irony, ...
所以这一点也验证了我选的B是正确的。
其他有的选项，例如A/C, 把round and red离破折号中间的green and striped老远老远，肯定就不对了。

-- by 会员 babybearmm (2012/7/11 13:06:53)

久闻Baby姐大名!!!这道题一下子就明朗了!!!
突然觉得豁然开朗...感谢上面的战友们对这道题的贡献了~~

jiaoguitar

http://forum.chasedream.com/GMAT_SC/thread-735356-1-1.html

Grace1211

做完了OG13的语法部分...其中大部分的题目很原来都没有什么变化..唯独这一题实在是令人十分纠结.. 也没看懂OG的答案的意思..求各位牛牛解答.
这题目有另一哥们之前发过但没有高手解答.重发一次求助啊!!!!


OG13-132：
Although appearing less appetizing than most of their round and red supermarket cousins, heirloom tomatoes, grown from seeds saved during the previous year – they are often green and striped, or have plenty of bumps and bruises-heirlooms are more flavorful and thus in increasing demand.

A Although appearing less appetizing than most of their round and red supermarket cousins, heirloom tomatoes, grown from seeds saved during the previous year
B Although heirloom tomatoes, grown from seeds saved during the previous year, appear less appetizing than most of their round and red supermarket cousins
C Although they appear less appetizing than most of their round and red supermarket cousins, heirloom tomatoes, grown from seeds saved during the previous year
D Grown from seeds saved during the previous year, heirloom tomatoes appear less appetizing than most of their round and red supermarket cousins
E Heirloom tomatoes, grown from seeds saved during the previous year, although they appear less appetizing than most of their round and red supermarket cousins

有牛人可以帮忙每个选项解释一下吗..太揪心了...TT

-- by 会员 joshuacjy (2012/7/8 20:10:26)

这题每个选项挨个看肯定费时间，所以我觉得简单方法就是先提主干找split. 提主干的时候，两个破折号中间的部分纯粹属于插入语，去掉不管。主干就是：


_______________________, heirlooms are more flavorful and thus in increasing demand.


后半句是个完整的independent clause. 所以前面空格处该是
类似这样的：Although SVO   (as a dependent clause)
或者是这样的：Although adj   （比如"although appearing less appetizing")


然后扫视每个选项，分别提取空格处的主干，跟以上模板对照：
A. heirloom tomatoes
B. Although heirloom tomatoes appear
C. Although they appear, heirloom tomatoes
D. Heirloom tomatoes appear
E. Heirloom tomatoes, although they appear


只有B符合语法要求（也就是上面的模板 Although SVO）。搞定！


如果还不放心的话，把破折号加进去，这下考察B的修饰语。有个原则，就是诸如modifier placement中讨论的，这部分描述什么，就要离什么更靠近些。发现破折号中间这部分，尽管什么bumps and bruises我不懂什么意思，但是green and striped我懂，正好和round and red形成鲜明对比啊！所以说破折号中间的内容需要靠近round and red才能体现出这个“鲜明对比”的意思。联想起Ron说的，dash的一种用法就是表示surprising, irony, ...
所以这一点也验证了我选的B是正确的。
其他有的选项，例如A/C, 把round and red离破折号中间的green and striped老远老远，肯定就不对了。

-- by 会员 babybearmm (2012/7/11 13:06:53)

我想问一下 although后面不是应该是一个independent clause 嘛， 为啥although appearing也可能是对的呢

Irisyf

好清晰~！

babybearmm

我想问一下 although后面不是应该是一个independent clause 嘛， 为啥although appearing也可能是对的呢

-- by 会员 Grace1211 (2012/7/26 9:14:14)

Good question!
http://forum.chasedream.com/GMAT_SC/thread-527959-1-1.html

ninamikou

从主谓分析 马上派出ACE
然后D中把原来转折语气去掉
所以选B

starchh

baby果然厉害

ARG

久闻Baby姐大名，百闻不如一见！赞

小白出国

我怎么认为插入语应该直接跟 要修饰的词后面，所以这个也是一个好的排除方法。