求解答~~

jeans2011

语法大全
679.Temporary-employment agencies benefit not only from the increasing demand for clerical workers but also the higher profits made when highly paid professionals are placed, requests for whom have increased in the recent wave of corporate takeovers.
(A) the higher profits made when highly paid professionals are placed, requests for whom
(B) the higher profits that are made in the placement of highly paid professionals, requests for whom
(C) from the requests for highly paid professionals, who make higher profits for the agencies when placed and whose requests
(D) from highly paid professionals, whose placement makes higher profits for the agencies and whose requests（E）
(E) from the higher profits made in placing highly paid professionals, requests for whom
我选了C。。不应该是benefit not only from demand for... but also from requests for...吗？
677.Sunspots, vortices of gas associated with strong electromagnetic activity, are visible as dark spots on the surface of the Sun but have never been sighted on the Sun’s poles or equator.
(A) are visible as dark spots on the surface of the Sun but have never been sighted on
(B) are visible as dark spots that never have been sighted on the surface of the Sun
(C) appear on the surface of the Sun as dark spots although never sighted at
(D) appear as dark spots on the surface of the Sun, although never having been sighted at（C）
(E) appear as dark spots on the Sun’s surface, which have never been sighted on
为什么不能选A？

677.Sunspots, vortices of gas associated with strong electromagnetic activity, are visible as dark spots on the surface of the Sun but have never been sighted on the Sun’s poles or equator.
(A) are visible as dark spots on the surface of the Sun but have never been sighted on
(B) are visible as dark spots that never have been sighted on the surface of the Sun
(C) appear on the surface of the Sun as dark spots although never sighted at
(D) appear as dark spots on the surface of the Sun, although never having been sighted at（C）
(E) appear as dark spots on the Sun’s surface, which have never been sighted on
为什么不能选A？

mslancaster

小马虎，是not only from but also from, 不是for.

C的the request for professionals 怎么翻译呢？ 为了professional而存在的request?这个东西能benefit 那些angencies么？

看看A的原文要表达的是什么？高额的利润，从安置高薪专家中获得。那么D就和C犯了一样的错误，意思不对。只有E保持了原本A的逻辑意思，又修正了A的错误。


A的意思是  are visible（能被看见）on the surface of the sun (在太阳表面上）
那么到底是能站在太阳表面上被看见，还是它出现在太阳表面上？

but 后面have never been sighted on犯了一样的错误，谁会跑到太阳上面去看它们？烫死了啊，摄像机也烧化了。再说咱们貌似还没把航天飞机送到水星金星过，更别说太阳了。。。。

根据这个逻辑，只能选C， 说这东西appear on sun, 出现在sun上面，sighted是过去分词做定语，不是被动语态，因此这里的at依然是sunspots at,而不是看见它的人at 太阳上。

jeans2011

第二个题我明白了~~可是第一个还是不太懂。。。我对C的理解是“不仅从增加的需求（for clerk）获利而且从需求（for professionals）获利”，这不是很平行么。。。

mslancaster

不是 你仔细看人家没划线部分的句意

Temporary-employment agencies benefit not only from the increasing demand for clerical workers but also

agencies benefit from the increasing demand for workers

化简

A benefit from demand

increasing是形容demand的， workers是说demand是哪方面的demand

因此是对于劳工的需求，使中介公司盈利。

但是but also benefit from requests for professionals

这里你可能觉得是“企业对专家的需求”
可是你再往下看，看下面划线的部分

who make higher profits for the agencies when placed and whose requests

whose指代的是专家
这里又有了whose requests xxxx
这个就变成专家们的需求了？那么再往后看没划线的部分， have increased in the recent wave of corporate takeovers.

这个专家的需求（而不是公司需求专家）在最近的公司收购中增加了

逻辑还通顺么？


平行首先是逻辑意思的平行，而不是对对子，觉得哪个更相似就选哪个。

逻辑意思上，显然E更好，而且更大程度的保留了A原本表达的意思。

jeans2011

哦~~~明白了~~谢谢解答！

saber0425

OG13上选的就是A啊！！！！！

mslancaster

才发现这个是OG13的第17题

看OG吧，OG上说C错在although后面必须是完整的句子
但sighted这里是过去分词。

我记得这题GWD上给的答案也是C,而且还是GWD的课上,理由就是我讲的那个

果然被GWD害的不浅呀

jiaoguitar

是的，although要跟完整的句子，这是OG13我这次刷出来新要点。

bob9603

才发现这个是OG13的第17题

看OG吧，OG上说C错在although后面必须是完整的句子
但sighted这里是过去分词。

我记得这题GWD上给的答案也是C,而且还是GWD的课上,理由就是我讲的那个

果然被GWD害的不浅呀

-- by 会员 mslancaster (2012/6/29 16:29:58)

哈喽，我还有个关于although的疑惑~这题选A肯定没有问题，但我想知道如果把A中的but 换成 although是否可以~换完后，能否也可以像but平行一样，省去主语，sunspot~？

bob9603

才发现这个是OG13的第17题

看OG吧，OG上说C错在although后面必须是完整的句子
但sighted这里是过去分词。

我记得这题GWD上给的答案也是C,而且还是GWD的课上,理由就是我讲的那个

果然被GWD害的不浅呀

-- by 会员 mslancaster (2012/6/29 16:29:58)

哈喽，我还有个关于although的疑惑~这题选A肯定没有问题，但我想知道如果把A中的but 换成 although是否可以~换完后，能否也可以像but平行一样，省去主语，sunspot~？

-- by 会员 bob9603 (2012/7/8 17:24:57)

介个问题，小菜自己查了帖子了，差不多晓得了~~~~