When drafting the Declaration of Sentiments that was adopted at the Seneca Falls Women's Rights Convention in 1848, included in it by the author, Elizabeth Cady Stanton, was a call for female enfranchisement.
(A) When drafting the Declaration of Sentiments that was adopted at the Seneca Falls Women's Rights Convention in 1848, included in it by the author, Elizabeth Cady Stanton, was a call for female enfranchisement. 没有主句，fragments (B) Including a call for female enfranchisement, a draft of the Declaration of Sentiments was adopted at the Seneca Falls Women's Rights Convention in 1848 that Elizabeth Cady Stanton wrote. including 悬挂修饰 (C) When the Declaration of Sentiments drafted by Elizabeth Cady Stanton was adopted at the Seneca Falls Women's Convention in 1848, a call for female enfranchisement had been included in it. 时态错误，改变句子含义，被动awkward，PS，代词指代不用太深究ambiguous问题，只需要确定1，先行词存在，2，单复数一致即可。 (D) A call for female enfranchisement, included in Elizabeth Cady Stanton's draft of the Declaration of Sentiments in 1848, that was adopted by the Seneca Falls Women's Rights Convention. 无动词，fragment (E) When Elizabeth Cady Stanton drafted the Declaration of Sentiments that was adopted at the Seneca Falls Women's Rights Convention in 1848, she included in it a call for female enfranchisement. 正确答案是E没有异议，但是这个C啊除了完成时态的滥用，prep说这个it 指代很模糊 When A by B was adopted at C in 1848, E for F had been included in it. it前面这么多名词它指哪个啊。。。求解啊。。。 这个句子我觉得我觉得简化一下就成了When A was adopted in 1988, B had been included in it.请问这个简化是否正确？如果正确的话这个it 完全指向A木有很模糊啊。。。
C选项的简化没有问题，When A by B was adopted at C in 1848, E for F had been included in it. 不过it的指代确实是含糊的，是A还是C呢？ 代词指代通常是看逻辑，但是也有两个规律，主从对位的话一般优先指代，就近的优先指代。如果是主从对位，那么明确是指代A，但这里不是主从对位，因此是就近指代，那么更像是指代C。但是逻辑上应该是指代A，所以就除了问题。
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