GMAT OG12 SC 36

arthur4303

Dressed as a man and using the name Robert Shurtleff, Deborah Sampson, the first woman to draw a soldier’s pension, joined the Continental Army in 1782 at the age of 22, was injured three times, and was discharged in 1783 because she had become too ill to serve.
(A)    22, was injured three times, and was discharged in 1783 because she had become
(B)    22, was injured three times, while being discharged in 1783 because she had become
(C)    22 and was injured three times, and discharged in 1783, being
(D)    22, injured three times, and was discharged in 1783 because she was
(E)    22, having been injured three times and discharged in 1783, being
请问A 三个并列动词短语怎么能不用连词而用a,b,and c的结构体现？ joined the Continental Army in 1782 at the age of 22, was injured three times, and was discharged in 1783 because she had become too ill to serve.这是什么句型？

superbat28

a,b,and c.这个结构就是三者并列的结构，在这道题里就是三个动词并列，同时修饰同一主语。

stella512

Bat,看到你在，请教一下啊，1，B中的she had became如果换成D中的she was是否依然正确？是不是had became强调她慢慢变的一个过程，而she was有她本来就有太多伤病的意思，和前文的逻辑意思“她是由于参军受伤才有很多伤病的”不符啊。
2，我查了一下词典，D选项中的injured本身就有被动的意思啊，为什么还要特别加上was，是为了要强调她被伤害还是说要和后面这个也要用被动意思的词discharge保持平行对称啊

stella512

忘了说“谢谢了”，嘻嘻

qiuhua01234567

1.B换成she was错误，因为前面有过去时间点，had done出现，强调时间顺序。证明了个逻辑关系，因为become ill，她才退伍的。
2.OG里说的就是被动，- -

superbat28

对，用过去完成时可以体现出一个先后顺序：先是过去完成时，然后是一般过去式的事情，有这么一个时间轴上先后的顺序关系。