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[作文互改] arg59 求各位大神狠拍!! 421第一篇arg

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发表于 2012-4-10 13:12:33 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
59) The following appeared in a memo fromthe president of Bower Builders, a company that constructs new homes.
A nationwide survey reveals that the twomost-desired home features are a large family room and a large, well-appointedkitchen. A number of homes in our area built by our competitor DomusConstruction have such features and have sold much faster and at significantlyhigher prices than the national average. To boost sales and profits, we shouldincrease the size of the family rooms and kitchens in all the homes we buildand should make state-of-the-art kitchens a standard feature. Moreover, ourlarger family rooms and kitchens can come at the expense of the dining room,since many of our recent buyers say they do not need a separate dining room forfamily meals.
Write a response in which you examine thestated and/or unstated assumptions of the argument. Be sure to explain how theargument depends on these assumptions and what the implications are for theargument if the assumptions prove unwarranted.

提纲  ①
Anationwide survey 不一定适合BowerBuilders
     ②Anumber of homes in our area built by our competitor Domus Construction havesuch features and have sold much faster and at significantly higher prices thanthe national average→盈利
   ③we should increase the size of the familyrooms and kitchens in all the homes we build and should make state-of-the-artkitchens a standard feature.→to boostsales and profits



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沙发
发表于 2012-4-11 22:29:12 | 只看该作者
Close scrutiny, however, revealsthat the,主语没了
其他的还行,比较标准的A
板凳
 楼主| 发表于 2012-4-13 00:16:54 | 只看该作者
close scrutiny 就是主语啊
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