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       I totally agree that parents are thebest teachers of their children. Parents have a big effect on their children bytheir behaviors, communication manners and value systems.

       First of all, as a child, parents mightbe the first batch of people they meet since they were born. Before getting inschool, children would stay with their parents all the time, so that they will tryto imitate and learn from the older generation. What’s more, childhood is thevery important times for a person to establish his/her value theory. That’s whyI think parents are the best teachers for a person. If he/she lives in a familyfilled with love and appreciation, he/she might be friendly and like helpingothers; but if the child lives in a family full of troubles and violence,he/she might have a shadow of members both in family and society, it’s hard forthem to communicate with others, they might be unconfident, unstable andselfish. Parents form an atmosphere for their children and which plays acritical role in a family.
       Besides the family aspect, as a person,it is their character and quality that matters much more to the society. There’san old saying goes: it takes ten years to grow a tree, but a hundredyears to educate a person to be a gentleman. Influenced by thistheory, in my point of view, people’s character is more important than anyother issues like how much you make every month, what grade you get inschool.  But this character are mostformed or influenced by their family education in people’s early times. Parentsare the teachers in every field, it is pretty important for parents to set agood example and influence their younger generations in a positive manners orin an optimistic attitude.
       All in all, it is obvious that parentsare the best teachers.