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20101210NA 独立写作 （3.30）
题目：你觉得完全做完一个project再开始另一个好，还是同时进行两个或更多projects好？
写作提纲：
总观点：同时进行两个或多个projects更好。
分论点1. 单独做一个project 容易有疲劳感，多个projects同时做，令大脑可以接受新鲜刺激，也可以从中获得休息，提高效率。
分论点2. 多个projects 可以互相激发灵感。
分论点3. 多个projects同时进行令人有紧迫感，从而会更有效率的利用时间。
写作正文：
Some people would prefer immerse in one project at a time because they consider that carrying out many cases simultaneously is hard to cope with and will finalize in doing nothing good. However I would like to work on several projects at the same time and the reasons will be stated below.

It is obvious that people get bored and tired after concentrating on single project for a long time. Scientific research shows that sometime it is benefitial for human brain to do something else. That is to say, right like our body, our brain need some fresh air to keep healthy. By switching to other jobs at an approporiate time, one can certainly perform better.Therefore, doing multiple projects all at once will help you work things out more efficiently rather than be a distraction.

In addition, sometimes other projects might act as fount of inspiration for the task at your hand. For instance, last semester I undertook an advertisement design and meanwhile I was in a case stady group working on online marketing. These two tasks incidentally connected to each other and I found that ideas related to any one of them could be a stimulus for ideas about the other.  Consequently, I fulfilled both of them perfectly with fascinating ideas welled up to my mind .

Last but not least, focusing on single task might lead to procrastination which is a quite popular mental trouble for modern people. By doing multiple jobs all together, which means by uploading more pressure on your shoulders, you can certainly get a sense of hurry and get your job done more efficiently. That's why I hold that doing several tasks at a time will help people save their time.

In general, one's performance can be bettered by switching to other tasks when they feel tired about projects in process. Moreover, different tasks sometime will provide you different opinions or angles and will impel you to make full use of your time. With all these reasons, I would prefer undertake several projects all at once.

maylovehe1

Some people would prefer immerse in one project at a time because they consider that carrying out many cases simultaneously is hard to cope with and will finalize in doing nothing good. However I would like to work on several projects at the same time and the reasons will be stated (as) below.
àMLH: for however, I think you can use below sentence “After a close scrutiny over various factors, I side on the opposite.”


(To begin with,)It is obvious (It is obviously shown) that people get bored and tired after concentrating on single project for a long time. Scientific research shows that sometime（有时？sometimes http://corner.youth.cn/yfjt/201201/t20120104_1907182.htm） it is benefitial(beneficial) for human brain to do something else. That is to say, right like (Just like? 本人才疏学浅了) our body, our brain （also?）need some fresh air to keep healthy. By switching to other jobs at an approporiate(appropriate) time, one can certainly perform better. (偶不太明白喔) Therefore, doing multiple projects all at once will help you work things out more efficiently rather than be a distraction. (感觉rather than不太对)


à MLH:
1. According to scientific research, people would be benefit more when they focus on multiple projects.不过“Scientific research shows” 是不是更加具体一点会更有说服力呢？例如哪一方面的研究报告说明。。。
2. 最后一句: Therefore, doing multiple projects at all once is better than doing one single job, becuase it is more effective and efficient.


本人才浅了，请高手进来看看吧！sorry