推荐信，请给位大神给润色下，看看有啥要改的，，，，虚心求教

小楼独醉 · 发表于 2012-3-27 11:37:24

To Whom It May Concern,

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Not only did #### perform well in examination, she also did good jobs in applying the knowledge in textbook to the reality. During my class discussion about the exchange regime, ###### and her group members showed great interest in the relationship between the RMB appreciation and the undergoing intense pressures of inflation in China. Then they used the econometric model learned in class to test the effect of the exchange rate regime reform on RMB exchange rate pass-through and proposed useful suggestion.

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普渡哥 · 发表于 2012-3-27 11:40:53

不要太套模板，要是老美看到大家的推荐信都差不多，肯定生疑心的。

小楼独醉 · 发表于 2012-3-27 14:25:41

说实话，这个是中介给写的版主能具体点说说嘛？

小楼独醉 · 发表于 2012-3-27 14:26:30

还有什么错误不？请大牛指教

zhangjun1118 · 发表于 2012-3-27 15:08:51

Not only did #### perform well in examination, she also did good jobs in applying the knowledge
找到一个语法错误。。。正确的应该这么用 not only but also/ not only.. but

zhangjun1118 · 发表于 2012-3-27 15:12:04

可能确实套了蛮多模板的。。没办法你要找中介就只能这样他给你写成咋样就咋样了除非你自己改或者自己重写有些时候确实自己写的要比中介写的好的多但是前提是英文写作水平要好
Anyway good luck

这个RL总体中庸水平吧没啥亮点。。

小楼独醉 · 发表于 2012-3-27 17:30:36

大家继续批判，，，，不要客气，，，多多益善

普渡哥 · 发表于 2012-3-27 21:52:56

其实推荐信语法没有特别重要，写得太好太模板别人会以为是假的。你帮给中介的钱给我一半，我能写出比这好十倍的。

小楼独醉 · 发表于 2012-3-27 22:08:20

小楼独醉 · 发表于 2012-3-27 22:10:02

版主大人饶命啊，能搞个免费的不？

推荐信，请给位大神给润色下，看看有啥要改的，，，，虚心求教

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