twe-001 上大学的理由

lingchen33

第四篇 twe  第一次限定时间,请大家评评 能有多少分

谢谢

people attend college or university for many reasons(for example, new

experience, career preparation ,increased knowledge).why do you think

people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples

to support your answers.

  eople attend college or University for many different reasons. I

believe that three common interconnected reasons determined people to

attend college or university: increasing knowledge, career preparation

and new experience.

Increasing knowledge is the first and probably the most important

reason that people attend college or university. As a youth, people are

always eager to improve their learning ability. Increasing knowledge

can help students to broaden their sights, and make them more

excellent. Besides The ultimate purpose of college or university

education is replaced the empty brain with open one.

  

Consider the practical angle, career preparation is becoming more and more

important in this competitive society. For people who want to gain a better job, more

chance to promote and a higher wage need more special knowledge and skills, which

college or university can provide.

Apart from increasing knowledge and career preparation, new experience is an

another good reason. People can find all kinds of people in college or university. This

means having more opportunity to meet some one who has the same interesting as

you. And for many people, going to college or university is the first time they have had to make the decision by themselves.

All in all, I really recommend people that should attend college or university if

they have chance to . it is good for them and their future.  

  

[此贴子已经被作者于2004-9-17 16:04:30编辑过]

seamoon8

以下是引用lingchen33在2004-9-11 22:32:00的发言：

第四篇 twe  第一次限定时间,请大家评评 能有多少分

谢谢

people attend college or university for many reasons(for example, new

experience, career preparation ,increased knowledge).why do you think

people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples

to support your answers.

  eople attend college or University for many different reasons. I

believe that three common interconnected reasons determined people to

attend college or university: increasing knowledge, career preparation

and new experience.

Increasing knowledge is the first and probably the most important

reason that people attend college or university. As a youth, people are

always eager to improve their learning ability. Increasing knowledge

can help students to broaden their sights, and make them more

excellent. Besides The ultimate purpose of college or university

education is replaced the empty brain with open one.

  

Consider the practical angle, career preparation is becoming more and more

important in this competitive society. For people who want to gain a better job, more

chance to promote and a higher wage need more special knowledge and skills, which

college or university can provide.

Apart from increasing knowledge and career preparation, new experience is an

another good reason. People can find all kinds of people in college or university. This

means having more opportunity to meet some one who has the same interesting as

you. And for many people, going to college or university is the first time they have had to make the decision by themselves.

All in all, I really recommend people that should attend college or university if

they have chance to . it is good for them and their future.  

  

请问一下斑斑推荐的这篇作文能得多少分？另外上面标出绿色的部分偶觉得看着句子有点不太对，以给讲一下吗？

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