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[作文互改] A62 assumption 练习 最近要把所有的A题型都练一遍才安心啊~球拍~

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发表于 2012-3-8 22:01:09 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
62) The following appeared in a memo from the director of a large group of hospitals.
In a laboratory study of liquid antibacterial hand soaps, a concentrated solution of UltraClean produced a 40 percent greater reduction in the bacteria population than did the liquid hand soaps currently used in our hospitals. During a subsequent test of UltraClean at our hospital in Workby, that hospital reported significantly fewer cases of patient infection than did any of the other hospitals in our group. Therefore, to prevent serious patient infections, we should supply UltraClean at all hand-washing stations throughout our hospital system.
Write a response in which you examine the stated and/or unstated assumptions of the argument. Be sure to explain how the argument depends on these assumptions and what the implications are for the argument if the assumptions prove unwarranted.

The argument of the director from the memosuggested that they should equip all their hospital's stations with UltraCleanto get keep away serious infections. This recommendation, however, isessentially dependent on several assumptions, and if these assumptions areproved groundless, the director's recommendation and its later implementationwill probably be rootless.

First of all, one assumption has been madethat the bacteria population decreased in the laboratory study is considerablylarge enough. Failing to inform us exact numbers of the two groups of bacteriacompared in the study, the memo only infers "a 40 percent greater reduction".If we overlook this assumption, say, the group that apply the former type ofliquid hand soaps just has too few bacteria to be noticed, we can hardly assertthat UltraClean has a greater effectiveness of antibacterial and thus the wholereasoning will be in vain.

Moreover, the assumption that the hospitalin Workby has the representitiveness to stand for other hospitals is taken bythe director. The hospital in Workby was reported to have a fewer cases ofpatient infection than the average after the use of UltraClean, but furtherinformation is not available. If this hospital is located in a region which hastypically a low rate of infection for a long time, the validity of theUltraClean to reduce patient infection can be unwarranted.

Even assuming that UltraClean is moreantibacterial effective and the regional differences can be omitted, moreassumptions are clearly needed to conclude the final arugment. Anotherimportant assumption perceived by the director is that bacteria is responsiblefor the infection. The memo does present some facts about the bacteria andinfections, it can not be verified that the bacteria is the casual factor toinfections. Maybe the infection is caused by virus or other unhealthy factors,then the antibacterial UltraClean will do nothing with the infection and thereis no need to make the change in hand soaps.

To sum up, those assumptions mentionedabove are vital to conclusion. Should the assumptions been strongly corroboratedby the director of the group, his argument will surely become more cogent andconvincing.
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发表于 2012-3-9 11:30:14 | 只看该作者
The memo does present some facts about the bacteria andinfections, it can not be verified that the bacteria is the casual factor toinfections.
句法有问题。

没有展开写。英文语法水平需要继续提高。
板凳
发表于 2012-3-10 14:21:30 | 只看该作者
其实还有就是这类建议类的题目,最后一点都可以说的是这个建议的可行性或者说唯一性,能不能采用其他的建议或者办法?
的确你的语言表达要多多注意提高,句子不要太生硬,单词要用的准确,恰到好处!
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