我的GRE作文模板

大剑Jade

事先说明， 我的模板主要是指ARGUMENT，因为那个比较好套模板。而ISSUE，则建议大家多记一些短语，句型，这样在写作的时候可以用这些丰富的变化来衔接。之所以我ARGUMENT用模板，主要是因为有模板的话的确比较好写，而且也可以比较省心，让自己在考场上充满信心，至少在ARGUMENT方面不会打怵，这样为之后的VQ部分攒出不少精力。既然ARGUMENT非常好套模板，何乐而不为呢？

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This argument is well presented yet far-fetched. It lays a claim that ... Nevertheless, the argument is in effect definitely unreasonable due to several  flaws after a close scrutiny, albeit it may appear plausible at a cursory glance.
First off, a threshold problem arises in this argument that ...However, this contention is open to a number of interpretations. ... We would never know if ...Hence, without accounting for and ruling out other likely scenarios, by no means could the author contend that ...
Moreover, even though the author might be able to provide evidence for us to deduce a solution to the problem presented above afterwards, the argument still maintains ill-conceived. Another problem could be located that ... It may be ... but it's totally possible that ... To corroborate his point, the author should pay a close heed to as well as cope with the representative possibilities mentioned above. Only the evidence of ... is the key to bolstering his recommendation.
Ultimately, even if the foregoing assumptions might turn out to be supported by ensuing evidence, a crucial problem remains that ... But this doesn't make sense since ... In this light, it's reasonable to cast doubts upon the author's presumption which I reject as inadequate, in that ... For instance, the author omits to inform us that ... Pursuing this line of reasoning, it proves to be the author's responsibility to mull over his assumption and then furnish it with cogent evidence so as to pave the way for a more tenable argument.
In retrospect, it seems precipitous for the author to jump to the conclusion based on a series of problematic premises. To dismiss the specter of implausibility of his recommendation, the author ought to come to grips with all existing flaws, such as... After all, feckless attempts with a fallible method could be nothing but a fool's errand. Thus, only by grasping the gist of this argument could the author draw a convincible conclusion.

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我这个模板通篇废话不多，只是把必要的话进行了修饰后穿了起来，而也达到了300+的字数。当然，我不建议大家直接用我这个模板，一来我的模板不一定是6分标准的，因为我最后AI综合分确实不是6分（遗憾ing...）；二来，这个模板不是自己的，难免语言习惯等会有冲突。
把这篇模板拿出来只是希望能够抛砖引玉，启发大家的思路。然后，大家可以自己写出自己的模板——这个不光是对写ARGUMENT有利，而对ISSUE也会受益匪浅，因为大家辛苦地整出自己的模板之后就会发现，很多语言可以用到ISSUE之中，起到承接的作用，让自己的行文更加连贯。
也正因为如此，我最后ISSUE才使劲码了700+的字（虽然因为略微跑题而导致没能拿到6分，但那是后话，暂且不表），比有模板的ARGUMENT还要多（600+）。（注：以上所指的字数均为没有废话全是内容的字数，望周知。）
有了模板之后，写作时大脑就能集中于说理方面，专心做填句子就好了，这样会为自己减少不少负担，至少不用担心自己在文采方面的表现了。
值得注意的是，这个模板是动态模板。所谓动态模板，就是指里面的词汇，甚至句式都不是一成不变的。比如有的instruction要求的是recommendation，那当然就要把相关的词汇都换成这个，靠也得往这方面靠。当然这只是最基本的动态，写作的时候思路一定要活，要根据不同的题目对自己的模板进行小修小补才行——而这就要求平时扎实的写作功底，必须要进行勤奋的训练才能使自己在考场上也能应对自如。

竹林中人

谢谢大剑！

abey627

哇~~~UP！！！

abey627

ps~请问大剑，对于一些关键词语和句型的积累都来自哪里？怎么样才能很丰富，新颖，而且很地道呢？

大剑Jade

ps~请问大剑，对于一些关键词语和句型的积累都来自哪里？怎么样才能很丰富，新颖，而且很地道呢？

-- by 会员 abey627 (2012/3/5 19:40:56)

积累的地方会有很多啊，各种渠道。不是给你压力，不过学英语确实是时时刻刻的。新闻，纽约时报，甚至看比赛都是积累的方式呢。但不推荐看范文啥的，希望你能够直接看看美国原装的东西，新闻，电视剧都好（当然选材也需要广泛，不能只看越狱那种。。）。总之要说想突击把自己的语言包装的很地道很丰富确实很难，这也是模板的作用之一啊，事先想好了怎么写就会使得语言丰富简单很多了。

abey627

⊙﹏⊙b汗~这么说的话让我一个还有47天的人情何以堪啊T_T绝望了~
这一个月以来为了写综述倒是看了一些美国top journal的文章，不过都没有积累。

我是打算看范文，背一些新概念4的文章，再背一些写作的经典句型的，不知道行不行@_@
啊...不管是语言还是思想都欠缺好多啊好多啊...

anniewong1990

顶！

saite123

请问大剑，argument一个模板就够了？总觉得不太现实啊

大剑Jade

请问大剑，argument一个模板就够了？总觉得不太现实啊

-- by 会员 saite123 (2012/3/25 15:44:22)

是啊 ，多处地方用词灵活一些就行

evelynzhu0225

介会不会被判N/A啊？